My first char [Dart LOD]

[360]

Hello everyone, i'm triyng make some chars, learning about spriting.
Sorry about my poor english but i hope than you understand.:thumb: ^_^
Let's go:
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/4396/dartwo4.png[/IMG]
And it's the true char:
http://www.legendra.com/art/wallpapers/legend_of_dragoon_wall_390.jpg
OBS: This is he transformed in a dragoon, he seems like it, without the wings
and some details....
I need know what is bad, i need some tips, about shading,etc.
What you think? Post please, so i try make better. ^^
The hair i don't make, i will chance soon.
Thanks!!

 

[badmonur]

the hair is perfect, keep it like that.
But forgive me if this sounds stupid. Work on the crotch area a bit. The decending spike like pieces that come off of the chest part.
Other than that nice nice nice work you have.

 

[ReiKGT]

He looks good. the armor could use a little detail around the gauntlet. other than that and the hair (needs bandana and doesnt look like dart's hair much) its good. but for a fist char its awsome.

 

[coyotecraft]

Right, Dart's hair pointed back is i remeber right

 

[badmonur]

but if you pointed it up in rmxp it would look like a goku knock off. But work on the armor a bit

 

[360]

Thanks for the comments.
I will change the hair and some details. But remember, it's my first char iam not very experient, so take easy :D but i like the comments. Thanks again.

 

[Mea]

Ah, I loved that game (even have the action figures on my desk). I assume this is the outfit you're referencing. You've got a good start to him too though I agree the pants need a little work shading wise and he's gotta have the headband. You might want to add some brighter hilights on the armor, the red looks a little flat. A couple of dots of a white or light peach color might work. The right paudron (shoulder armor) might need some downsizing too: there's supposed to be a marked difference between the right and left side of his armor (left arm acts as shield I'd asume from the design, while the right is more free to swing the weapon)

Good luck on him.

 

[ReiKGT]

Yeah if i remeber dart is right handed.