My experiment [1 new pic added]

[syphonmax]

>_< I had no idea what to call this, but whatever.

Basically I made 4 images yesterday and I would actually like to know which one looks best :thumb:

Plus if you want to be extra helpful tell me which one I could improve on and how :wink:

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[zenrdy]

Dude, You are god. No but, seriously they are all good. The feel is different though, The first looks like those people are at a night club but, I don't know if thats what your going for.Second, Looked weird blended with the club people, never the less it is still good.Third, weird looking, Why would you white out the people? Don't take it the wrong way it's cool but, Don't feel right with out the people. Last, You know me, I love plain backgrounds with all the vector stuff. But, the text seems a little blended wrong. "Trance" Like how that is put up there, Thats something I love. But, Thats just me.


Edit: Just noticed on the first, It had the words "Trance" through out the people. That was the wrong way to go, Just kind of put it on the top layer and maybe lower the letters opacity by alot.

 

[Aepriz]

There all nice , But I think the second one is best .

I don't know why when I looked it was like : THAT ONE !

 

[syphonmax]

Dude, You are god. No but, seriously they are all good. The feel is different though, The first looks like those people are at a night club but, I don't know if thats what your going for.Second, Looked weird blended with the club people, never the less it is still good.Third, weird looking, Why would you white out the people? Don't take it the wrong way it's cool but, Don't feel right with out the people. Last, You know me, I love plain backgrounds with all the vector stuff. But, the text seems a little blended wrong. "Trance" Like how that is put up there, Thats something I love. But, Thats just me.


Edit: Just noticed on the first, It had the words "Trance" through out the people. That was the wrong way to go, Just kind of put it on the top layer and maybe lower the letters opacity by alot.

Haha awesome :p I love it when you call me a god. The word going through the people thing was actually a mistake but nevertheless it still looks awesome =D

There all nice , But I think the second one is best .

I don't know why when I looked it was like : THAT ONE !

Really O_O wow I always thought it was going to be the first but thanks

Oh yeah I called it an experiment for a reason, because I wanted to make every image look different from the other, but still keep it simple and not go to far away from the original design and I think I nailed it.

*Waits for Kraft* =D wonder what he will say

EDIT: New pic added, I edited the 1st one =D

 

[___]

I think your newest looks best by far.  The top one was very striking but I think the silhouettes were a little busy inside, and the other three are just way too dark, way too busy and confusing.  Right now the biggest problem is that my eyes want to look at the people and ignore the text, which I'm sure is the opposite of what you want.  Fade the people out a little bit and maybe use perspective to draw the eye toward your text, positioning them vertically in a way that makes sense for that.  Once they're lighter in color the darkness of your text combined with a perspective line suggested by the positioning of the people should really make it pop.  I would try a layout like this:

|  i , i  |
'  ' ' '  '

With the text across their feet.  Excuse my ridiculous ascii art, I hope that gets the point across :D

Oh yeah, if that's a font, I would love to know what it is; otherwise bravo, it looks great.

 

[Kraft]

I would have to either say the first or last one...

yep, both of them are great, but the last one is probabley the best ^_^ (it mixes the color well, and they look more like silouhetts... rather than pictures with brush strokes over it (like in the first one)

good job though ^_^

 

[syphonmax]

I think your newest looks best by far.  The top one was very striking but I think the silhouettes were a little busy inside, and the other three are just way too dark, way too busy and confusing.  Right now the biggest problem is that my eyes want to look at the people and ignore the text, which I'm sure is the opposite of what you want.  Fade the people out a little bit and maybe use perspective to draw the eye toward your text, positioning them vertically in a way that makes sense for that.  Once they're lighter in color the darkness of your text combined with a perspective line suggested by the positioning of the people should really make it pop.  I would try a layout like this:

|  i , i  |
'  ' ' '  '

With the text across their feet.  Excuse my ridiculous ascii art, I hope that gets the point across :D

Oh yeah, if that's a font, I would love to know what it is; otherwise bravo, it looks great.

The font was Trashco: http://www.dafont.com/trashco.font

And thanks ^_^

Ahaha I knew Kraft wouldn't be able to resist and I gladly agree with you the first and last do look best =D