My Characters and Roxas

[HG-Bounder-X]

I tried making a Roxas sprite, I don't think the hair turned out quite right but its good enough <_<
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t115 ... /Roxas.png[/IMG]
RTP Suitable--v
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t115 ... -Roxas.png[/IMG]


Hashi
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t115 ... /Hashi.png[/IMG]


Sukuru
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t115 ... Sukuru.png[/IMG]


Bounder
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t115 ... ounder.png[/IMG]


Some Girl
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t115 ... -X/My1.png[/IMG]


All but Hashi and Sukuru were made before I stopped doing a Gradient in the clothes.

 

[Mascarpone]

Pillow shading. That's a no-no

In general the shading / coloring is a little funky and personally i would choose different color schemes for them. They're ... very bright. Electric.

Edit: Ah yes also .. those cloths would have to be pretty darned skin-tight for you to be able to see that much of those female characters ... (there's no delicate way to say this) crotches .. take a look at the cloths you or your friends are wearing and go form there. Life studies are always fantastic

 

[Colormagix]

Your roxas doesn't really scream roxas to me. There are some design flaws and color choices that just can be over looked. You made his hair very clumpy... too clumpy actually. Also the color of the hair is wrong.

Here is a reference of Roxas

http://kingdomhearts.rpgplanet.gamespy. ... blonde.jpg[/IMG]

 

[HG-Bounder-X]

Yeah, I had a very hard time with his hair =\
And the girl >_> I got carried away. I just traced the shades with the new color.
I already fixed those main problems though, I stopped the pillow shading -.- screwed everything up, and the tightness of the girl's clothes isn't as tight anymore in my sprites.
I think the best two are Hashi and Sukuru, the two most recent ones.
Aside from Hashi's glove and Sukuru's front of the dress.

 

[Colormagix]

Well saying that you have fixed the errors proves nothing. When you are finished with the fixing post the new versions I would be interested in taking a gander at them.