Modern/Survivalist Game Over

[lunarea]

After puttering around with new brushes in Photoshop, I came out with this game over. In my opinion, it'd work best with a horror/survivalist type game like Silent Hill. I can also see it at the end of a modern/futuristic game that has that gritty factor.

This is my first time making a game over screen, so hopefully you won't be too disappointed.

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http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/8801/gobylunareaxs4.png[/IMG]

If you use this, please credit me somewhere in your game. I'd also love to hear from you if you decide to use it

Any thoughts/opinions?

 

[green raven]

the lettering could use some attention
maybe a little blur to soften the hard edges?
pretty nice, especially for a first try.

 

[lunarea]

Thank you for the comment, I'll see what I can do about the letters

Here's a title to possibly go along with the game over:

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http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/3528/tilunareavj8.png[/IMG]

 

[badmonur]

looks like someone carefully painted the biohazard sign with blood and then got killed. It looks alright but the rivits could be a bit smaller and try to get some tones on that red.

 

[Tindy]

I like the end screen :D Title screen could use some work, like the handprint, but other than that it's good