Mercenary girl char (W.I.P.)

[fbu]

Hello everybody.
I'm here to show you some new stuff I've been working on lately.

It's just a small preview of a new characterset that I'm doing. I haven't finished the first frame because I haven't had much time, but I would love some feedback from you guys.

Here she is:



It's a mercenary girl, one of the protagonists of my new RPG, a survival horror game. I will add some shoes and the hair and draw a bandana with a cool skull later.

It's all by now. I hope you like it.

Credits: Mack and Aerendyll (Template) thank you guys ;D

FlyBoyUnder ~ RRPG

 

[Jason]

Could you maybe add imgzoom tags to it so we can see it up close please.

Also, from what I can see, it needs more contrast, and seems to be pillowshaded.

 

[fbu]

Just an update:



Now with hair and bandana!

~Use

 

[ultimaodin]

Honestly you need a lot more contrast between the bandanna and the hair, it reads as one combined thing.

I like the skul and bones on the bandanna, well done on that part.
The cargo pants (I guess that's what they are meant to be) look more gritty and puffy rather than different shades. Try using larger clusters of each colour.

 

[fbu]

Update :D



And this one was made by Night Walker: