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BrunoTR;193665 said:
You know, I think the hair looks good as it does now. I am right or deluded?

Also, is here anything else that can be done to improve this?

Any work you do can have something done to it to make it better. You should never feel as though your work is perfect, when ever an artist creates a piece he usually critiques his own work and admits that he could go back and edit the work he would. That is to say that you should always keep your mind and eyes open for more suggestions and modifications. As mentioned throughout the thread you need to work on the side view of the head. Also your character does remind me a bit of the dragon ball z character android 17. Might I suggest that you use him as a hair style reference.
 
Lonesight;193944 said:
Any work you do can have something done to it to make it better. You should never feel as though your work is perfect, when ever an artist creates a piece he usually critiques his own work and admits that he could go back and edit the work he would. That is to say that you should always keep your mind and eyes open for more suggestions and modifications. As mentioned throughout the thread you need to work on the side view of the head. Also your character does remind me a bit of the dragon ball z character android 17. Might I suggest that you use him as a hair style reference.

I just goggled that. His hair is far too straight.

Mkay, I'll try looking at the elementals for the hair.
Something also bugs me about the positioning of the eyes on the side-view pose.
Also, I have already tried importing this ino my game, and when he walks up, the top of the hair looks really weird. I think it might be the outline, but I dunno.
 

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