Main Character of The Last Summoner (Kye) (PA)

[Jason]

If this doesn't qualify as a Resource, can it be moved to somewhere else please




Well I've got the clothes all done, but as some of you might know, I've lost my touch at shading, so I'm not particulary proud with the head.
The boots I can't shade to save my life, lol, so I'm having multiple attempts and will post again when shaded.

Edit--
Added a new version, TRIED to shade the shoes, and made the shoulders different, also tried to do something with the head

Can I have some C&C please.

 

[mawk]

His head looks a little too gradient-shaded, and maybe a little on the saturated side; I can see where the colors turn into each other if I look closely, but otherwise, a palette with a little more contrast and less saturation would probably help you. His shoulder-things look a little too straight ahead for a 3/4 view, as well. You won't need to increase their width any to fix that, just try and make it taper towards the end more evenly.

As for the boots, you could probably take the boots from one of the RTP characters for reference -- or rip them directly; for something as minor as boots, I doubt anyone'll hold a grudge there.

 

[-Kira-]

Oh man... Boots haven't shadows and this pink/purple very sux xD But i must say that lineart is not bad

 

[rikuken]

You can start off by adding more color on the boots.

 

[Jason]

@Miek, yeah, I'll see what I can do about the boots, but I don't quite get what you mean with the shoulders, and I can't do the head without it looking stupid, but meh.

@-Kira- It's purple because I see it as a magic colour and my game is about it, lol

@rikuken, I did say I haven't shaded them, I'll have a try at them and repost it to see what you think.

Thanks for the replies guys, I'll see what I can do.

 

[mawk]

@Miek, yeah, I'll see what I can do about the boots, but I don't quite get what you mean with the shoulders, and I can't do the head without it looking stupid, but meh.

I'm assuming the shoulder things are sort of like shoulder pads. If this is the case, they shouldn't be that thin all the way, since the RTP template has a slight top-down perspective to it. Make them a little more triangular, basically, to make it look more like they're being seen from the top down than straight ahead.

 

[Jason]

Okay, I've edited him and posted the new sprite in the main post, what do you think now ?

The head is like a hood, so I tried to make it have creases or something, Don't think it turned out too well lol.