main character for game

[40yearoldvirgin]

main character for rpg im making
any critisism on it?
http://users.nexopia.com/uploads/1950/1950372/yeeee.JPG[/img]
http://users.nexopia.com/uploads/1950/1950372/Travis sprites.png[/img]

 

[Arithon]

Isn't that Dante from DMC?

Kool

the only things that I can see that could be wrong are the legs, the pants when he is walking forwards looks odd (on the actual stepping frames) and the pants when he is walking away seems to need a little work (it looks as though their hanging low on the first frame and then his bottom sags quite a bit on the stepping frames) on the plus side the third frame looks fine and it is quite well done

Hope it helps

(I hate critizising, but it's probly best to tell the truth...)

 

[Mascarpone]

Looks just like Dante..

The sprite works not bad but you're losin' points for creativity bud D:

 

[ZephyrSkye]

I have another comment. He has something on his back in the back view, but it doesn't show up anywhere else. I'd either get rid of the thing on his back or add it to the side views (and possibly the corners on the front view.)

 

[Malachi]

Did YOU make it? I recall seeing that on charas.net....

 

[Mascarpone]

Did YOU make it? I recall seeing that on charas.net....

Tun-dun-duuuuuhhhn

 

[40yearoldvirgin]

Did YOU make it? I recall seeing that on charas.net....

i didnt make it myself, but my friend whos making the game with me did, he makes all out sprites ^_^

Looks just like Dante..

The sprite works not bad but you're losin' points for creativity bud D:

didnt mean to make it like dante, in all honesty, if i changed the hair to brown or blue, i think hed look completly diffrent ^_^

Please do not double post. The Edit button is not made of sulferic acid, I assure you.