Luce Template (WIP)

[Nidhogg]

I started making this template, for a game i'm working on right now.(Please don't copy)
I call this guy Luce. as soon as I finish it I'll make him a girlfriend, Lucy.

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5426/t ... adofg5.png[/img]

EDIT: Now I changed the "neck". Hope it's better now.

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2662 ... adone8.png[/img]

And a crappy Example(REALLY Crappy):
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5484/e ... ateuu9.png[/img]

I just thought I should post it here, so I could get some feedback on how I'm going so far.

So, what do you guys think?

Thanks!:D

 

[Arcanum]

Hmmm, this is pretty cool, though a little blocky looking. Mostly that fact seems due to the size of the template it looks like, so maybe making it a little wider in some places like around the waist would help. Also, it looks a little hunched over as well, so maybe moving the head back on the body for the side views as well as on the back view would help that. In the front view maybe moving the head up would help too. Other than that though, it seems like a good start.

 

[Lexy]

He looks like hes starved and about to fall over.

 

[Nidhogg]

hehe, thanks!

now that you guys told me, I can see that he really seems like the hunchback of Notre Dame heheheh

@arcanum: Actually, I was trying to add this blocky feel that it has. Seems it worked, altough I will still fix some things, like making it wider, as you suggested.

Thanks!

 

[Nidhogg]

Bump. I added a few thing a couple of days ago, but I couldn't bump until 3 days have passed, right?

Any more feedback?

thanks!

 

[KazeN]

As the others say, he's really thin. Might try making him a little "fatter". Also, people do move their arms when they are walking, why doesn't he do that? Is it intentional? O.o