Looking for some writing help.

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I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this, but I decided to make this topic here since I can't seem to find the "project recruitment" subforum (I'm not even sure if rmxp.org has one.)

Anyway, I'm looking for someone to help me spice up my dialogue. I consider the stuff I write passable, but a lot of it is kind of plain and a bit boring. Basically I'm looking for someone who is interested in writing for a story-driven game.

My project is called "Linus". It's getting some good feedback even though I don't have a demo posted. Here's a link to the thread:


viewtopic.php?f=78&t=64499

If you're interested in helping me out, let me know. Thanks!

 

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Try watching videos perhaps on youtube on various of dialogues on normal people talking, or in movies or perhaps in games such as in RPG Games. Try watching something related to this project you have.

You may then perhaps get a small taste or to-say about how the dialogues should be, thus changing them to be matching to what ever you saw or learned from. You can use some small parts of personalities from them too.
Hope that helped.

Another way is to study communication and such, but that takes time.
Just hang out with your friends and meet new people perhaps, that may help too, to increase your communication skills and socializement.