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Bassically the simple logo of a team-gamemakers-proyect.
Bye and goodluck :tongue:.
Bassically the simple logo of a team-gamemakers-proyect.
Bye and goodluck :tongue:.
Logo for a team
- Thread starter Exouthing
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kinda looks like "team" says "teant". and "oujin" looks like "oujjn"
Anyway, the image of the logo is decent, I suppose, ignoring the text. It's an unwieldy and odd-looking shape; doesn't really look like it's representing anything important. The mirrored red and blue "S" shape is pretty alright, but that darker 3rd part coming off it looks like a gimpy broken leg or a really long tumor hanging off.
The text needs a lot of work ... For one, the positioning looks absolutely arbitrary. It's not centered, it's not adjusted, doesn't line up with any element, it doesn't pop, it doesn't look like it's an element of the logo ... It looks superfluous. The "m" looks like "nt", and the "i" looks like a "j".
It's better than most amateur logos I see thrown up in this forum, but it's a long way from professional. Keep trying! I'd recommend referencing some information on logo creation--particularly stuff about visual balance.
Anyway, the image of the logo is decent, I suppose, ignoring the text. It's an unwieldy and odd-looking shape; doesn't really look like it's representing anything important. The mirrored red and blue "S" shape is pretty alright, but that darker 3rd part coming off it looks like a gimpy broken leg or a really long tumor hanging off.
The text needs a lot of work ... For one, the positioning looks absolutely arbitrary. It's not centered, it's not adjusted, doesn't line up with any element, it doesn't pop, it doesn't look like it's an element of the logo ... It looks superfluous. The "m" looks like "nt", and the "i" looks like a "j".
It's better than most amateur logos I see thrown up in this forum, but it's a long way from professional. Keep trying! I'd recommend referencing some information on logo creation--particularly stuff about visual balance.
Mmm... thanks.
Maybe I delete the "team", I agreed, it´s sucks.
1 thing, I´t say "Doujin Aelom", the "D" and the "A" are the strangers simbols XD.
And, this is a very retard petition like: "hey you master of the pixelart make It better", really, It´s like this.
Can someone make it a little better?, I don´t know, maybe uuuh... the color?, or delete some not-ussefull things?.
It´s just a petition for make it better.
Goodbye, goodluck and thanks.
Maybe I delete the "team", I agreed, it´s sucks.
1 thing, I´t say "Doujin Aelom", the "D" and the "A" are the strangers simbols XD.
And, this is a very retard petition like: "hey you master of the pixelart make It better", really, It´s like this.
Can someone make it a little better?, I don´t know, maybe uuuh... the color?, or delete some not-ussefull things?.
It´s just a petition for make it better.
Goodbye, goodluck and thanks.
Mascarpone
Member
While i commend you for your efforts and trying to be creative, it's not speaking very well. It's too flamboyant.
Try losing the digital-ish scratchy font and find something simpler, and smooth out the shape a little.. more clean lines and graceful contours and we'll work more from there. But as stands its just too messy too flashey and all the meaning is lost in the execution.
Try losing the digital-ish scratchy font and find something simpler, and smooth out the shape a little.. more clean lines and graceful contours and we'll work more from there. But as stands its just too messy too flashey and all the meaning is lost in the execution.
Mascarpone
Member
n-n-n-n-n-n-no LESS colorful.
Exouthing":2auia56p said:
First off, it's "Okey Dokey, Artichokey." Get your sayings right. Second, really pay attention to Vennetia and Mascarpone's comments. A lot of what they said was right on the money.
The signs of a good logo are simplicity, good color scheme (not too many colors, but a few that work well together), and meaning. Any symbol in the logo should have some kind of meaning to what that logo represents. For instance, the Final Fantasy logos generally have an image of a main player or plot device behind the text.
Speaking of text, you want a nice simple font that is easy to read. Artsy fartsy fonts are generally a no-no, though you might get away with it sometimes (i.e. Prince of Persia, Halo), but these fonts reflect what the logo represents, and were not chosen "because they look cool" (though they often do).
Another thing about logos is to either create them as vectors or at really large resolutions (vectors are better) so they still look good when scaled to different sizes.