Kismet 22

[bacon]

Kismet 22


Basically I am going to copy dev and do a webcomic. Its mainly just going to be for practice but any critique or ideas would be cool. Im all open for suggestions and comments (like dev's thread) but I am going to try to focus more on the actual story.

Also, I do realize that the first image doesnt match at all I decided to do a color scheme and style after making it and I am too lazy to redo it. :c

Also I do realize it isnt very good or anything so please bear with me. Its mainly for me to practice.

Suggestion List!!!!

• Also, the fairy turns into a scary imp lady if she ever gets hurt (physically not emotionally). That's if she becomes a fairy again instead of a head accessory for a wimpy wizard weirdo.
  
• And the hero (Kevin or Xavier?) likes Dance Dance Revolution. Just because. And this somehow helps his melee skillz.
  
• Xavier: collide with gerald mid-teleport
  
• Razzlepaz to this source of the disturbance.
  
• gerald: use headband to lasso an object and break free of warp

 

[bacon]

Hello. For some reason there is this strange kid here. He doesn't really know why he is waving or who he is waving to but for some reason he feels like he was meant to do it. He actually feels like he is meant to do a lot and has aspirations of becoming a hero some day. For him, the possibilities are endless.

Look at that face, it is the face of a true hero. One who is destined to be any and all types of heroes.

He doesn't really know where he is or what he is doing though. He just sort of awoke at this odd place.

Oh look, he is at the edge of some cliff. That's a surprise.

 

[bacon]

There really is no need for him to get any closer to the edge and the last thing he really wants to do is fall off. He is almost positive that it is his destiny not to fall off the cliff; he may have infinite possibilities but this isn't one of them.

 

[bacon]

Now he really just has no clue what is going on anymore. He is trying to remember where he came from or what he is doing on a precariously placed cliff but nothing is coming to him. There also does not seem to be any nearby weapons. He is sure that at he needs a weapon, it is his destiny. Or is it? He really does not know. What he does know is that he is leaving this cliff and there ain't no coming back.

 

[dadevvtsvre]

i love this already :heart: :heart: :heart:

 

[bacon]

i love this already :heart: :heart: :heart:

Thanks mister you are definitely like a huge inspiration too ~o:

It might be best to come back to him later.

 

[bacon]

It seems that we have discovered a feeble magician and it looks like he is casting his very first spell. Even though he looks like he is about to wet himself, he has a lot of inner potential. With a boost of confidence, he is most likely going to become a powerful, inventive, and charismatic wizard. He seems to have an affinity for fluffy animals along with wizard movies. He actually sports the same look as one of his favorite wizard on T.V. Nobody understands him like this bloke does. One day he is going to become a powerful wizard just like his wizard hero.

But right now he is just some fifteen year old kid who just woke up in a forest with a wand next to him.

 

[bacon]

And right now he just really isn't good at magic, but all great magicians electrocute themselves from the start.

However, he really doesn't have the time to mess up. Judgement is upon him, along with most everyone else. We will get into that later though.

Anyways, what shall we call him?

 

[Toams]

hahah this is cool
now that the characterization is done we (you) can focus on some more interesting situations

 

[bacon]

hahah this is cool
now that the characterization is done we (you) can focus on some more interesting situations

yeah so far the plot really hasnt been moving along I just want to introduce characters and give them all knacks because there are going to be a lot of them. Hopefully Ill get the ball rolling. Thanks mister Samot sir.

 

[Toams]

btw i wasn't implying that these situations were not interesting
i was just emphasizing the importance of interestingness

 

[dadevvtsvre]

is this going to be a legit cyoa with commands and junk? because if so

Anyways, what shall we call him?

> gerald leibowitz

 

[bacon]

btw i wasn't implying that these situations were not interesting
i was just emphasizing the importance of interestingness

Well either way I have to admit that nothing interesting has happened. Yeah, I definitely want to get going in plot, hopefully I will soon.

is this going to be a legit cyoa with commands and junk? because if so

Yes, sort of. Basically any and all commands are welcome but I am not guaranteeing that every suggestion will be implemented.

 

[bacon]

> gerald leibowitz

Oh, so we are already familiar with his name. That's good. You then are also aware that Gerald will most likely die sometime before this take ends.

As we already know, Gerald fancies a T.V. wizard and fluffy animals. Gerald also has an obsession with staffs and headbands. He wears a headband to harness all of the magic inside of him so that is doesn't sweat out after a vigorous exorcise routine. Its common sense to wear a headband and any magician in his right mind knows this trick. Yet he sees new wizards all the time fail to follow this trick. That is how he is able to tell the experienced wizards from the non experienced wizards. And he is not going to be caught being a terrible wizard. Nosiree.

 

[bacon]

Gosh, if Ron Weasly caught him without a headband, I dont think he would know what to do. He might cry a little actually.

Oh Ron. That smile. That look of confusion. That golden red hair. Everything about him is perfect.

 

[bacon]

Jesus mother of a monkey, what was that!?

 

[Mystic Mage]

That hero done fell'd off a cliff! Destiny was like "screw this, you can't assume what I will or will not do! Stupid little hero punk I'll make you fall just to show you what for!"
Gerald makes interpretive dance pose... now! Hah!
I'm liking this!

I know you have not asked for one yet but... cool spell name! RAZZLEPAZ!
Yay? Nay?

 

[bacon]

Yeah man, sure.

Also thanks for taking the time to read this and comment and stuff. I really appreciate it.

 

[bacon]

Well it certainly wasn't this. It seems like this will hit land quite later.

 

[bacon]

Now that everything is settled down, Gerald probably wants to scadaddle out of here and explore that crash. It might be something useful. Or something menacing. Plus anyways, warping yourself seems easy enough. Just focus and...


also remember this is a cyoa so any comments on what to do next would be cool.