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KH Characters ... just trying to finish something

|3_32;150551 said:
If you are wondering about the requests, I've mostly become bored of them, so sorry if you were waiting on them.

If you won't be completing the requests, would I be able to please ask that you post the furthest you got with it so that there is a good foundation to work from.

And the new sprites are very nice.
 

Murcu

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The prisoner's clothes are nice, but I don't like his beard. And his hair seems to turn black there at the top left of his head. I know it's probably dark red, but I think it throws it off.
You have the hair parted more to the left side of his head- I think it gives the impression his head is facing that way. Perhaps move his beard over to the left a bit, and have the center of it more in line with his hair part. I don't know, but something looks off.


REALLY nice sprites though overall. I especially love the raincoat feller.
 
The face of the first one looks a bit weird. It looks like he's watching sideways. Maybe you should put his right eye a tit more to the centre, and detail his left eye a bit. Perhaps you also could extend the cape so that it also covers his right shoulder.

The belt buckle of the second one may be a tad too high, I think. And his pants are perhaps a bit too wide and rounded, though that depends on the material they're made off. I'm not sure whether that's an armor, or just regular cloth.

The belt buckle of the third is placed a bit too much to the right. His feet face forwards, his head faces forward, it'd be a bit strange for his waste to face sideways. You could also round the heels of the guy a bit. They look a ti too squared right now.

The fourth one looks good, but I'm puzzled as to why the pants he's wearing are different for his both legs. Usually, pants are quite symmetrical.
 

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