Kaos Sprite

[Siege]

I was looking at other peoples work and was inspired to do some myself, so i thought i would have a go even if i am an amateur. Well here it is, so if you good spriters out there could give me some C+C please:

http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/4786/100vw6.png[/IMG]>>http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8466/char32bf2.png[/IMG]

 

[Tohsaka]

You definitely need some shading on the colored line that seem to traverse the entire unit.

 

[Siege]

UPDATE: i worked on the shading,

 

[Mac]

Wrong side for the shading, the light is supposed to come from the top left on the sprite so if you flipped it over it would be right.

Nice work though..still lacks the correct shading and contrast, make your colours have more variation.

 

[Siege]

Okay, thanks Mac, i flipped it, hows it looking now?

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8466/char32bf2.png[/IMG]

 

[The Clap]

Can't really see any difference in the colours used for shading. Nice to see someone using though : )