nathan5556
Member
well i made this title sceen wondering if its good...
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http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee85 ... ragons.jpg[/img]
Is this title screen good....
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Eriol Clowphengire
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Physically yes, but it seemed that the font's trying to break out with the theme you wanted to come up with. What's up with using a hip-hop font if your game would be set in High Fantasy?
No. That dragon looks very cut-out - the edges are VERY noticeably ragged, and the flame is very pixelated. I was only able to read "Nathan Productions" after looking at your username, and the type for the game's name is very out of place - it's even half-overlapping the dragon's teeth! Also, the entire thing doesn't mesh together well. It looks like a test screen for a movie - you know, where they add the background and effects and things in later?
Simplify the text. Make a different dragon, and I do mean *make* - and when you do, make sure he actually looks like he's part of the screen, right now he's extremely non-threateningly looking off into lala land. If you do swipe a graphic, at least do yourself a favor and blur the edges a bit.
Simplify the text. Make a different dragon, and I do mean *make* - and when you do, make sure he actually looks like he's part of the screen, right now he's extremely non-threateningly looking off into lala land. If you do swipe a graphic, at least do yourself a favor and blur the edges a bit.
Perihelion
Sponsor
I agree with what Tindy said, and I wanna throw this out: I hope you weren't trying to make dragon plural there. Possessive doesn't make sense, and it would be embarrassing to have a grammatical gaffe on your title screen. :x
At first I thought you had an interesting texture going on there, and then I realized that I really need to clean my screen.
Anyway, to follow up on what Tindy and Dung Beetle said, I can almost guarantee that your in-game graphics look nothing like what that dragon looks like. You need to make sure everything, including your title screen, is consistent with whatever you're working with. The font is a graffiti font, and unless you're making some hip-hop based fantasy theme (Samurai Champloo comes to mind), then it needs to go. If that is in fact what you're doing (which I highly doubt, I'm guessing you just picked that font because it looked cool), then your dragon needs to look similar.
Otherwise, spice up the background a bit. A plain black background is just not really that effective with what you're going for visually. Add some textures, maybe a translucent scene of someone fighting a dragon or a town getting burned by one or something.
Anyway, to follow up on what Tindy and Dung Beetle said, I can almost guarantee that your in-game graphics look nothing like what that dragon looks like. You need to make sure everything, including your title screen, is consistent with whatever you're working with. The font is a graffiti font, and unless you're making some hip-hop based fantasy theme (Samurai Champloo comes to mind), then it needs to go. If that is in fact what you're doing (which I highly doubt, I'm guessing you just picked that font because it looked cool), then your dragon needs to look similar.
Otherwise, spice up the background a bit. A plain black background is just not really that effective with what you're going for visually. Add some textures, maybe a translucent scene of someone fighting a dragon or a town getting burned by one or something.
nathan5556
Member
ok then guys thanks
Colormagix
Member
The font and images really don't work well together.
kevinsllama
Member
Nothing fits in. Change the dragon. The current font is unreadable, change that. Also try to work on the layout a bit more.