INNOs sprites

[INN0]

Hello guys

I am doing some sprites for my first VX game, and i am only getting started with spriting So I would really love some advices, feedback and such things

I tought about posting it in the WIP/SMall things thread but decided to make this topic so I could keep all my spriting in here

Here is the guy who is gonna be protagonist (he is gonna wear a simplyer outfit most of the time but i started out with this) - It isnt fiinished as i need to add a lil more to him and need to do the sideview and backview


Trying to fix the quality when zooming :i


Finished


Please constructive critism and advice and you will get a cookie ! :thumb: :P

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

It's just simply noble! He looks more of an aristocratic seafarer to me . Do you have his character art btw?

 

[busbuzz]

it looks very good :p

 

[INN0]

Hello thanks to both of you for commenting

Im not sure what you meant by character art but here is his faceset stuff http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt15 ... rate-1.png
As you can see its mostly edited stuff from other faces from the game as I aint really in to the manga style.

About the noble stuff - I see what you mean but its kinda part of the idea as he will belong to a rich family of pirates, as his father who is captain of the ships gets the black mark he bequeaths the ship to his son (the protagonist of the game) but the ships crew gets upset about it and betrays him :P So thats why you 1. are a pirate 2. are noble 3. gonna wear another outfit as you gets betrayed

 

[INN0]

I finished the guy some hours ago but was busy so didnt post it until now

What you think?

 

[busbuzz]

the only thing i can say is that the shadows on the clothds look the same in both difections. Remember light comes from the upper left ;p

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

Hmmm... all is fine, color-wise. But since your game is quite serious, might as well choose a better template. His walking animation defeats the 'character' (what he is really supposed to be) of your character

 

[busbuzz]

maybe u could use alphaz template. It would give a better graphic impression and u could help with pirate sprites to the project

 

[INN0]

Hmmm... all is fine, color-wise. But since your game is quite serious, might as well choose a better template. His walking animation defeats the 'character' (what he is really supposed to be) of your character

Actually it isnt that serious at all I just wanna make a game in RPGmaker VX since I havnt done jet, and I wanna find out more than I allready know about it :D - About the walking animation you mean the way he kinda tries to fly with his arms?

Busbuzz - I think AlphaZ template is too big as i want it to fit to the original VX characters - I actually like the small guys looking like something near pokemon sprites :biggrin:

Oh and I will fix the light I was a bit sloppy and copy pasted without actually thinking of the sprite making sence..

 

[busbuzz]

hmm ok u cant blame me for trying u might be a good spriter and i could get some help lol. I have many civilians and a game with it is possible now. It fits my xptized mapping sets for vx

 

[INN0]

hmm ok u cant blame me for trying u might be a good spriter and i could get some help lol. I have many civilians and a game with it is possible now. It fits my xptized mapping sets for vx

Aint blaming you at all :D I am very happy for you helping and commenting

 

[busbuzz]

i know u dont, its just an expression. Im glad i am helpin. Keep the good work :p

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

"About the walking animation you mean the way he kinda tries to fly with his arms?"

Yes.

 

[busbuzz]

oh lol. its true! i didnt notice

 

[silver wind]

fly, baby, fly
*cough*
That's a nice sprite. Something bugs me with the the hat in the front view, it looks pixelated.

 

[INN0]

Hey guys thanks for feedback :D

Anyone know a VX template with child walking normal? Or do i need to do it myself? :D

Hmm Silver Wind maybe you are right but i dunno how i should fix it :|:

 

[busbuzz]

copy paste the same arms so theyre identical at least or check the annimation from the rtp and check the problem