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Alic

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Wow, I just joined the site today, and this was about the tenth game I downloaded.  I just wanted to say: it's incredible!  The storytelling is unique and interesting, the graphics and design are better than I imagined was possible in RMXP, and the entire tileset and beginning section of the game that you set in a modern city was so bold and enthralling for old school rpg like this!  I couldn't stop playing!  I should have been in bed 2 hours ago!  Darn it!

Anyway, while I was playing, the constant mispellings and grammatic issues almost messed up the flow of some of the most powerful scenes, and I kept saying to myself, "if only I could fix these typos, and play this game the way it should be played."

I just wanted to stop in here before I go to bed and say, I would be glad to edit the script for this game, for nothing in return, except of course the high reward of being included in such a wonderful project.  I wouldn't even ask to be mentioned in the credits -- I just want to help go the extra mile on this game and make it a little better.  If you're at all interested, contact me at arekusu4@gmail.com -- or just reply here, or message me -- this forum has private messaging, right?

Thanks again for the great module and story.  Truly inspiring.
 
Well done! I thinks it's a great game!
I never liked these long, story-telling games, but this one kept me interested untill the end.

The mapping is just fabulous, something I can learn from.

Keep the great work up!
 

Aida

Member

Wow, this game is so beautiful!  The forest maps are so well done.  You manage to add plenty of detail, but yet I don't get lost because the paths are straightforward enough.  I also like the panoramas in the background combined with the weather (like when you run around and it's raining), I really felt as though I was in a storm or something.  The dialogue was the only problem I think; if you can fix up the grammatical errors the whole thing will flow more smoothly. 
 
Very good the demo! Keep it up.
The mapping is very well done and the storyline too.
When i reached the end i was disappointed. I want more. The demo was very short!
Good work!

Sorry for my English. I´m Portuguese.
 
Wow, thanks for all those great replies. I havn't done anything with rmxp for the last couple of weeks. Must make time for it... Gran Turismo is absorbing all my time and with GTAIV coming soon...

I'll let ya know when I have some new stuff.
 

Aida

Member

I haven't seen any updates from you in a while; I hope you're still working on the game... I want to find out what happens after the "accident" when you get transported to the other world!  Also, if I didn't say it before, it was really cool the way you changed the weather (where it's grey and rainy at the top of the mountain, but by the time you get to the fishing pond it's sunny). 
 
Looks very nice, but I just have one problem. Call me crazy, but I find that font hideous. When I see someone using arial font, especially with the default window skin, I don't want to play their game. Maybe I'll try this out anyway when I get a chance.
 

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