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Ok man here's my crit:
I know your having issues with the hood, but I think it has to sharp of a hook. Make it a little more slack. Also,I think his front view stomach area is to thin. That's my opinion man, It's nice so far, you got skills!
 

Jason

Awesome Bro

You know you really shouldn't just flip the framed for walking up and down, if you look at the shading on the hood, it will flicker while you're moving, lol.
 

Jason

Awesome Bro

Ah, much better, now that looks decent, myself, I'd reccomend making the red slightly darker and giving him a sort of "dirty blonde" fringe so he doesn't look bald, unless thats what you're going for ?

Good so far though :thumb:
 

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