[HKCP] Appreciate Comments/Criticism

[WeaponOD]

A few new W.I.P's.








Still W.I.P's, I'd love to get c&c.

Thanks~.

 

[Siege]

Good start, not much to crit on right now....keep going! xD

 

[WeaponOD]

Updated.

http://i39.tinypic.com/e19n4o.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[Redman]

Wow, I'm wuite impressed.
Maybe you should give the sleeves a little more shadow.

 

[coyotecraft]

Looks really nice. I like the one on the right with the lighter outline on top.(you uploaded a new image while I was posting) You've got the basics down, good luck with the rest.
He's hair is long enough you might do a little animation. Not just the swing in the back but put a little bounce in the bangs. Up and out just a little in the stepping frames.
Hmm, looks like a certain one-winged angel. What I don't like about the outfit is the shoulder pads and the lower part of the jacket. It's shaped weird. Also I think the pants could be a different color, too much blue. But the shading is done right.

I disagree with Redman, the shading on the sleeves are perfect. People like to go heavy on the shadows were there aren't needed.

 

[WeaponOD]

Woot. Nothing too bad in comments yet! haha...

I rushed the shoulder pads, and the lower outfit thing is really troublesome... Maybe I should just add a cape/cloak... I might recolor the pants, with the brown color.

Thanks for the comments so far.

BTW here is the guy I'm basing the sprite off:

http://i40.tinypic.com/xdcbq0.png[/img]

 

[coyotecraft]

After closer examination, I take back what I said about the sleeves. You've made the arms lighter then the chest which brings them forward more. But they are at the same level so they should be receiving the same amount of light. So you can either darken the lower part of the sleeves or lighten the chest area to match.

The lower part of the jacket is weird to me because the length and angle. If it was shorter I'd say it looks fine but at that length it would be closer to the body unless there's some kinda wind blowing though.

 

[WeaponOD]

Updated.

http://i39.tinypic.com/153s6px.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[Siege]

Wow! This is looking great, your very talented!

I have one question.. How long is hair supposed to be, if longer than his shoulders maybe add in a sway of the hair on frames 2 and 4.

 

[burningstar2000]

that is so awsome really good i wish i can be that good

 

[WeaponOD]

@Siege: Thankyou. There is a slight sway... haha... Very slight.

@burningstar: Cheers.

Ill have the next row up shortly.

 

[coolguy]

Very good.Just fix the hair...
:D

 

[Berserker]

I think you still need more contrast or at least stronger high lights.
Otherwise its shaping up quite nicely.

 

[WeaponOD]

Updated. See first post.

 

[coyotecraft]

The pants look good. The hood looks weird cause that dark red is over powering, I'd put it back a bit more.
The shoulders look like foam padding. Are you going for a metal or fabric?
I'm talking about the red guy btw.

 

[WeaponOD]

The upper wear is supposed to be like hard foam/rubber.

I'll edit the hood when I get back.

 

[WeaponOD]

Oh updated the red guy. Having alot of trouble with the side view hood :shock:

:thumb:

 

[Sechs]

I really like your work. The designs are unique and original. It's always nice to have originality around.

Did you ever get my PM's for a request?

Are you going to be adding mouths to the character sets? I personally like them without.

 

[coyotecraft]

The light source should remain the same no matter which way he's facing. It looks like the light is coming from the side now rather then on top.
Here's a nice reference for the folds and stuff; it's close to what your making: [link]

 

[WeaponOD]

I went over the site... it helped... a little.

Updated. Still having a lot of trouble with the hood >:[|