(HK) Modern student

[lunarea]

I've been spriting with mostly RTP up until now, so I thought I'd try spriting with the HK base and see how it went.

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3342/progressod7.png[/IMG]

I'm somewhat satisfied with the result, though I think I could've done a better job on the hair and the socks. The shoes are probably the worst part of it, but I just couldn't get them to look better. I'll probably be reworking the hair.

C&C?

 

[Chaos_Prime]

very nice sprite there Lunarea. from what I can see from it there seems to be no flaw in the sprite at all.

 

[sixtyandaquarter]

The shoes are a bit off compared to the rest, but the rest looks pretty damn good. Particularly the skirt. Good job!

 

[Anonymous]

You need shading on the forehead and legs where the hair and skirt would cast shadows. Also, I'd move her right sock (her right, not yours) down one pixel. Because you placed it where the leg comes in a pixel, it looks like the sock is really tight and compressing her leg. Your skirt palette needs more contrast, zoomed in I can see a lot of detail, but a lot of it is lost at 1:1 viewing.