[HK] male lead (W.I.P.)

[Schnide]

I decided to try my hand at spriting the other day and this is what i came up with:
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/194/ma ... emotl2.png[/IMG]

Some C&C would be appreciated this is the first sprite I have ever made so be nice

 

[MistTribe]

Looks awesome! I don't see any flaws.. -stares at for a few minutes- I love the detail. Excellent job so far.:thumb:

 

[Malachi]

you sure it's your first? lol. It's very good.

 

[LightAndMagic]

Very nice for the first time. A couple things I suggest working on:
-The Hair looks very nice, except for the shading. It's somehwat pillowshaded. I suggest adding in a highlight, and more shadows on the right side of the hair.
-The black pants are pillow shaded. I suggest once again, making the right legging a bit darker (especially near the bottom), and possibly adding a higher highlight on the left legging.
-The black undershirt could use a bit more definition. The jacket should be casting a slight shadow on top of it, which could be defined more.

But very nice job, just work on it a bit more, and it will be perfect.

 

[Schnide]

Thanks for the compliments.

I did have a lot of trouble with the hair and the shading of the pants. its hard to convey the right fold with so few pixels to work with, but those where the first things I did on this sprite so hopefully I can go back and improve. I did actually have the jacket cast a shadow on the undershirt but maybe it was too subtle. thanks for the tips