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Hiryu's Revenge (MUST WATCH)

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I watched about two minutes of your first video and you lost me there.

Honestly, I don't see how this is a "MUST WATCH".
Your mapping is empty and needs lots of improvement. Try reading some tutorials and post at the mapping improvement thread.
Also you should make a little less randomely moving NPCs in that corridors. It just looks chaotic and doesn't make to much sense. (Are people running around like that in your school?)
Next is something that really bothered me: Japanese voice acting ripped from somewhere does not equate cool. Honestly why was it there? I don't speak japanese but I guess it didn't even fit what your characters said. Just don't use it.
Also your ripped face graphics are a bit distracting. I mean why was Aeris there? People won't see her as an independent character, but as the Aeris we all know. If you must use such ripped graphics take one that is not so popular.

Now on to the things that you should do:
Update this topic. You don't have a story description, not any character description, nothing that you need in this forum. Read the rules and update accordingly if you don't want the moderators to lock this.

Right now I don't see how I should enjoy this, but maybe you will be able to suprise me.

Hope this helps

~Dalton~
 
youngcrunk187":9kdkkwcq said:
Cocky bastard arent you...?

Well about the japanese: Go to the page and "READ" the F**** profile. and maybe if you watch the videos you'd understand whats going on smart ass. + its a wip i dont see anything wrong with posting it. you dont like it simply hit the x button. because you seem to be the only one that complained out of every one who's seen this. and if there are any others that have anything negative to say, same goes for you.


quote: who the hell is using ripped graphics? you tell me where i used ripped graphics from. yeah aeris is in our story? so what? obviously wasnt ripped from ff7 being the fact that ff7 uses 3d characters. (DUH). and if a mod see's this i dont really care. I bearly EVER come to this site anyway so i wouldnt really give 2 shits. im over here thinkin maybe you would enjoy this and that i should share.


End quote: Dont tell me what to use and what not to use. I dont like authority.


For those that support thank you. This will be released soon.

Oh boy... If you can't take critizism... Don't post stiff on the internet. Honestly I just told you what you should improve and you go all angry at me. I didn't personally attack you or anything.

As for your argumentation: I don't see why I should have to go to any page, if you are presenting it here. Just give me all the information here and I won't have a problem with it.
And it is the rules here that you need a short story description. A topic only with videos isn't allowed. So I simply refuse to watch them since I don't see how they should help me, after I saw the beginning of it.
Sure I am the only one who "complained" (if you must call it that, since I only told you to improve) but has anyone said anything positive? NO, they haven't.
Ripped graphics are not only ripped from videogames. I rather ment that you are using graphics that are not your own. I don't have anything against it, I just told you that taking such popular ones is going to distract from your game.
And if you never come here anyways, why are you posting here? Just post at the forum you are active in.
As to your end quote: Hell I was just saying that I THINK you should change stuff. I am not authority or anything, so what were you trying to say?

If you want to release this go ahead. I just doubt that many people will enjoy this.

Edit: Did you just edit your post where you were so angry? Oh boy... To bad I quoted that already, eh?
 
Dalton":1544jbg7 said:
Oh boy... If you can't take critizism... Don't post stiff on the internet. Honestly I just told you what you should improve and you go all angry at me. I didn't personally attack you or anything.

As for your argumentation: I don't see why I should have to go to any page, if you are presenting it here. Just give me all the information here and I won't have a problem with it.
And it is the rules here that you need a short story description. A topic only with videos isn't allowed. So I simply refuse to watch them since I don't see how they should help me, after I saw the beginning of it.
Sure I am the only one who "complained" (if you must call it that, since I only told you to improve) but has anyone said anything positive? NO, they haven't.
Ripped graphics are not only ripped from videogames. I rather ment that you are using graphics that are not your own. I don't have anything against it, I just told you that taking such popular ones is going to distract from your game.
And if you never come here anyways, why are you posting here? Just post at the forum you are active in.
As to your end quote: Hell I was just saying that I THINK you should change stuff. I am not authority or anything, so what were you trying to say?

If you want to release this go ahead. I just doubt that many people will enjoy this.






:shades: maybe you could have said it in a better way without being an asshole. and no im not mad because like i said. who are you to me?.. and about people who enjoy it? AS i say again. take a look at the page.
 
Sorry, but: WHERE was I an asshole? I never insulted you or anything. I even told you where you can get help with your mapping.
Just because I don't say : "OH MY GOD!!!!11!1 This looks great lol" I am not an asshole.

And by the way I checked your youtube profile... It IS real japanese, it just doesn't mean what they say in your game. If you want to just have sound effects than you could record your own or something....
 
Dalton":2dbkbz22 said:
Sorry, but: WHERE was I an asshole? I never insulted you or anything. I even told you where you can get help with your mapping.
Just because I don't say : "OH MY GOD!!!!11!1 This looks great lol" I am not an asshole.

And by the way I checked your youtube profile... It IS real japanese, it just doesn't mean what they say in your game. If you want to just have sound effects than you could record your own or something....




Tell me why i should listen to your opinion over how many others? :shades:

and NO. its not real japanese you know what the f*** im talkin about when i say that, dont be a smart ass. did you read the reasons why its used? i dont think you did.
 
Dalton":3an21i9s said:
Sorry, but: WHERE was I an asshole? I never insulted you or anything. I even told you where you can get help with your mapping.
Just because I don't say : "OH MY GOD!!!!11!1 This looks great lol" I am not an asshole.

And by the way I checked your youtube profile... It IS real japanese, it just doesn't mean what they say in your game. If you want to just have sound effects than you could record your own or something....




Dispite the japanese used and alla that crap you say is wrong, if you gave it a chance and just watched you would probly like it. try not to be so picky. if not thanks for watching at least. i dont wanna seem rude or anything. THANK you for your opinion.
 
youngcrunk187":2hmho1vt said:
Dalton":2hmho1vt said:
Sorry, but: WHERE was I an asshole? I never insulted you or anything. I even told you where you can get help with your mapping.
Just because I don't say : "OH MY GOD!!!!11!1 This looks great lol" I am not an asshole.

And by the way I checked your youtube profile... It IS real japanese, it just doesn't mean what they say in your game. If you want to just have sound effects than you could record your own or something....




Tell me why i should listen to your opinion over how many others? :shades:

and NO. its not real japanese you know what the f*** im talkin about when i say that, dont be a smart ass. did you read the reasons why its used? i dont think you did.

Just tell me the reason then for gods sake.

And I never said you should take my opinion over any others, but since you posted this in "project DISCUSSION" you kind of invited people to tell their opinion. And the opinions on youtube... That is youtube you know. Anything gets those OMGTHISISGOOD comments over there...

youngcrunk187":2hmho1vt said:
Dispite the japanese used and alla that crap you say is wrong, if you gave it a chance and just watched you would probly like it. try not to be so picky. if not thanks for watching at least. i dont wanna seem rude or anything. THANK you for your opinion.

Well do whatever you like, but I will stay "Picky"... I just don't hve the time to watch everything on the internet....

edit: mawk... are you alright?
 
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COMIC RELIEF :D

:box: :specs: :thumb:

thankyou thankyou *bows*

:shades: azrith001

Don't spam. This post was pretty useless and unnecessary. Just because the thread gets a little out of control doesn't give you an excuse to spam.
~Dadevster
 
Alright, this has gone far enough. I'm locking this thread.

youngcrunk187, this thread consists of nothing but a bunch of videos slapped on. Many of the videos weren't even yours, and when you claim another's work as your own, that's plagiarism, a warn-able offense. That shows right there you're not taking this seriously. But the fact that you repeatedly insulted and flamed another member is just unacceptable, after receiving criticism on stuff that wasn't even yours.

Dalton, I can understand how you'd be angry but if you have a problem with how someone is talking to you then simply report a post or let a moderator know. You don't need to keep responding to someone who is doing nothing but insulting and flaming. Responding to spam only creates more spam.

That is all.
 
"Plagiarism" is a BANable offense. However, since the videos in question were removed, I have no way of verifying it.

If you have evidence of plagiarism, report it to a mod or admin asap. Infringers will be banned swiftly & without prejudice.

Be Well
 

Ginko

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youngcrunk187":32lctlsx said:
Dalton":32lctlsx said:
Sorry, but: WHERE was I an asshole? I never insulted you or anything. I even told you where you can get help with your mapping.
Just because I don't say : "OH MY GOD!!!!11!1 This looks great lol" I am not an asshole.

And by the way I checked your youtube profile... It IS real japanese, it just doesn't mean what they say in your game. If you want to just have sound effects than you could record your own or something....




Tell me why i should listen to your opinion over how many others? :shades:

and NO. its not real japanese you know what the f*** im talkin about when i say that, dont be a smart ass. did you read the reasons why its used? i dont think you did.

Dude, if you wanna post here you gotta get prepared to get flamed. And btw, stop your whatever vulgar it is, and he's not being some buttock hole or whatever its you. You said its the best video ever, people just talking about your weak points and you go, "Who are you to me?" people comment that's how people improve.
 
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