help with title logo...plssss...

[dandanthedan]

This is the title logo i made for my game

is it any good??

i made that logo in a logo generator and im not really an artist...and the background i got it from site and i just layered them...i dont know anything more than that...

and this is my title screen...

(First img=title screen, 2nd img=title logo popping in the intro(from Woratana's intro script))

can someone help me improve my title logo?? plssss....

i think my logo is kinda bare...and i dont know how to place some things beneath it to make it cooler...^_^

 

[Tindy]

I think it's fine.  You might get a better response posting this in Resource Analysis, though.

EDIT: Referring to the 2nd one, mind.

 

[006]

Does the Logo have any meaning to the game, or not? The first one is horrible, way to much going on. The second one is OK, though 3D stuff should never be in a titlesceen. If you were going to choose from the two, use the bottom one, and place the logo at the top left.