harvest moon 2

[jordondavey161]

hey everyone today im showing you my harvest moon 2.
its a fan game.

it  currently has
rake and seed feature so you can rake and then plant seeds down.

and has a few levels kinda based on harvest moon on snes.

heres the video of it so if you like it or think you can help with it that would be great.

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=sobS_ZgopPA

 

[moog]

dude what.

 

[jordondavey161]

why did you say dude what.

 

[moog]

im not even going to comment on all the things wrong here (that's wyatt's job) ill just say that the video is really bad quality and i cant make anything out except for the magic explosions of crates.

 

[Durastik]

http://www.rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=35601.0

READ IT

We'll take care of the moderating, thanks. ~Mega Lenin

 

[moog]

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[Diegoale2000]

i'd suggest you work on this before even trying to show it again like that.
not only there's NOTHING to comment on, rather than your lack of a proper presentation, no intro, etc. but it also looks pretty awful.

put some work on your game before you show it, right now it looks empty and awfully boring.
also, a proper intro would be much needed.

 

[jordondavey161]

you get lost i was told by a modartor to show my work of my game and he knew my game was not that good

 

[So fist]

Jordanisme read the rules that Durastic just linked to and revise your post accordingly.  We are not counting that terrible video as a screenshot, so don't ask.  If you have any questions pm Wyatt or an administrator.

 

[jordondavey161]

who do you think you are.
i did not tho there was already a game called harvest moon 2 also i have aspergers syndrome so im not perfect and have learning diffaculties so ill take all you lot as nasty people.

a mod told me to show my game and he knew my game was as good as it is.(crap i know but im not a pro like you people probly are and thats how harvest moon games are like)

im going now and never coming back you nasty people

 

[So fist]

Also note that telling people to get lost because they noted and listed for you the flaws in your work is not a good way to start off around here.  We aren't very interested in people who don't want to listen to criticism that would help them improve.  And Diegoale is right.  Your maps are too wide and empty.  Try and find ways of varying the tiles in a manner that looks appealing and natural.  Also vary the shapes of your spaces.  Houses are not one square of a room, nor are many shaped like squares.  Just some thoughts.

 

[So fist]

who do you think you are.
i did not tho there was already a game called harvest moon 2 also i have aspergers syndrome so im not perfect and have learning diffaculties so ill take all you lot as nasty people.

a mod told me to show my game and he knew my game was as good as it is.(crap i know but im not a pro like you people probly are and thats how harvest moon games are like)

im going now and never coming back you nasty people

K bye.