Half-Kaiser PSyKe Showdown

[PSyKe611]

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244/PSyKe611/Resources%20RPG%20MAKER/Half-KiserShowdown.png[/IMG]
Well, it's the first time i work on Half-Kaiser so i want to know if i have the minimum requirements to work on the Template...remember, it's the first time:

Spoiler: Half-Kaiser Characters

First Character
Battler (It's not mine)
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... bsqb10.png[/IMG]
Version 1
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http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... ted1-1.png[/IMG]
Version 2
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... view-1.png[/IMG]
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... copy-1.png[/IMG]

I want critics, suggestions, etc... To get my work better and better! I will accept all the help too...

Regards,
PSyKe

 

[JD_Slasha]

I like it, I think that it looks relatively well shaded.... ummm my only suggestion would be having a bit more of contrast with the outlines for the clothes and hair and stuff, but in all actuality I like it. Good job. ^_^

 

[PSyKe611]

Well, thanks, i thinked in that, but for my first try, it's no that bad

Btw, here it is the battler i watched while i did the Char:

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... bsqb10.png[/IMG]

 

[Venetia]

@ J.D. Slasha: lol, I was actually going to recommend the opposite. You have done well with the dark outline thing but it looks like, here, for PSyKe611, that he needs to decide on the dark outline style or the receded, lower-contrast style of, say, ShowKaizer.

It looks like his waist-down & hair is low contrast while the shirt/torso is high contrast.

Also his bangs are very cute, but I think they need to be just a little bigger, coming in from the top. The way it is now, it looks like that clump of bangs is an accessory, not really connected to the rest of the hair.

But yes, it's a very nice job. I haven't seen that battler before. Did you make it?

 

[006]

Nice keep it up.

 

[PSyKe611]

But yes, it's a very nice job. I haven't seen that battler before. Did you make it?

No, it's Chinese/Japanese stuff...

To the rest, thank you...i'm working on it to get a better character!

 

[PSyKe611]

Here it is an update...

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... 12copy.png[/IMG]

Is this contrast is better on the torso?

EDIT: UPDATE:

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... view-1.png[/IMG]
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q244 ... copy-1.png[/IMG]

 

[PSyKe611]

Bump...please i need your opinion to continue my work!

 

[WalkingAbomination]

Good work for your first man, hm i think the rolled up sleeves are wrong, they should look more like this.
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/487/example1gl3.png

Also imo the bangs are too flat, and you should have a darker line going through the middle of the pant area because now it looks like he's almost wearing a skirt, and when the arms move back and forward the sleeves should change because they look the same on the moving frame, take a look at some completed characters and/or pictures to get an idea of how to go about that, well hope that helps some man.