Graphics. . Needs Opinion

[kidd6686]

Title Screen

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http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/kidd6686/title_screen.png[/IMG]

(Updated)Character Faceset and Sprite

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http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/kidd6686/Rune-2.png[/IMG]

WIP for Female

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http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/kidd6686/Mailey.png[/IMG]

ISOwork WIP

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http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/kidd6686/isodisplay.png[/IMG]

 

[Murcu]

That ISO set is AWESOME! I am quite envious!
But, I have a couple complains about the face:
Obviously the eyebrow sticks out over the hair. Also, the hair is muuuuuch lighter colored than the eyebrow, which takes away from the overall life of the picture, and gives it more of a sketch feel.
And, I'm sure you already plan on doing this, but the fella's hood needs to be colored in blue. I also think you should try and lower it- right now it looks like a wide collar rather than a hood.
ANyway, that's all just my opinion obviously.

I like the title screen alot. Very slick looking.

 

[jma666]

ya dude .hack rocks. the charcter looks aright

 

[SakuraPhoenix]

So this is where ya been...I missed ya ^^ as always your work is inspirational to me. I esp. like the iso work

 

[kidd6686]

kieara! I could say the same thing about your work =) and i missed you too my new game is ISO so expect alot more!

 

[ToriVerly]

Everything looks great but in my opinon I think you should incorporate rich red into your title screen. And your male face is a little bit gouged on the right cheek/jaw (my right not his) but it'll be a smaller picture so it's not a big deal. Like everyone has said, your ISO looks really good.

 

[Mea]

Very nice set of work. On the face set, I think you need to darken your lines a bit more - give them a more "inked" feel. the eyes look about right, but the hair could really use that dark definition like you have on the chin.

 

[kidd6686]

And your male face is a little bit gouged on the right cheek/jaw (my right not his) but it'll be a smaller picture so it's not a big deal.

On the face set, I think you need to darken your lines a bit more - give them a more "inked" feel. the eyes look about right, but the hair could really use that dark definition like you have on the chin.

Obviously the eyebrow sticks out over the hair. Also, the hair is muuuuuch lighter colored than the eyebrow, which takes away from the overall life of the picture, and gives it more of a sketch feel.
And, I'm sure you already plan on doing this, but the fella's hood needs to be colored in blue. I also think you should try and lower it- right now it looks like a wide collar rather than a hood.

I hit all these up and check it out!

 

[Siege]

Im not to keen on the sprite but the face graphics are top notch and the iso is a pretty good start too. I'd be glad to help you with some if your interested add me on MSN and we can have a chat, or if not through PM.

Saintminor@hotmail.com

 

[Murcu]

I like the new version! Nice improvement. But the bowl (cant think of a better word) of the hood could use some darker shading in my opinion.

 

[Chaos_Prime]

I found something like your ISO Tile Set your working on.
it's a 3D tile set I found before the hack so you could use this as a backdrop on your ISO tile set.

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http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/5240/3dtilesetty7.png[/IMG]

 

[kidd6686]

thats aweomse =) certainly can use them thank you I will post all of my ISO's as they are completed ^^

 

[Balian]

The title screen is amazing!! You could do with a color background though. (My opinion) Very pretty and well built.
Congrats on the ISO. This is coming along nicely! Keep it up!

~Sirus~

 

[fuzzy_memories]

Yeah, i love the Isometric view. .Hack// is good. off topic: do you think .hack is similar to Guild wars? PM me.

 

[Dylan Kenny]

I found something like your ISO Tile Set your working on.
it's a 3D tile set I found before the hack so you could use this as a backdrop on your ISO tile set.

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http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/5240/3dtilesetty7.png[/IMG]

Give credit to zany Don't post things unless you give credit. :yes:
Dylan

 

[kidd6686]

does this look like the iso graphics are the correct size compared to the main hero?

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http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/kidd6686/iso.png[/IMG]

**no detail or shading really has been added**

 

[Siege]

Looks perfect to me.

 

[~R~]

yep, they are in correct size

 

[Lei]

Yeah they match up but I think you should give the hero some form of black outlines lol. It would be a look not seen too much. Would also give for that "This is a game" look.

I like your original tileset shown on page one. Looks kewl. The simplicity is something that actually apeals lol.

I have one comment though, based on the made face. Look at the shoulders inside the hood then look at the outside shoulders. Notice that the line drops outside the hood? This would mean that he has no shoulders lol. The lines on the outsise would need to be higher in order to give the effect that the material is 3d on him.

Keep me posted ^_^

 

[kidd6686]

sorry i havent been on to reply. . . i see what you mean on the pic ill edit it ^^ how about my world map WIP?

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http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/kidd6686/map001.png[/IMG]

Before color >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> After Color