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This is an older tune made by me. Check it out if you will.
"Whispers"-http://www.box.net/shared/6ykga96ucj

And here's a newer, loopable battle tune created by me. It loops better in OGG Vorbis, but I put it up as an MP3 so people can stream it. It loops perfectly in game.
"The Vanishing Tide"-http://www.box.net/shared/fh7gd9goac

Let me know what ya think! I'm still a bit new to making music, and I'm not too great at mixing but I'm getting better! Feel free to use any of my songs in your games, just make sure you credit me! :grin:
 

clea

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Hi there I've listened to your songs ^^

whispers

it starts out okay, but soon gets repetitive, from 00:32, it feels too empty, but it gets interesting starting at 00:52. this song feels somewhat dark and emotional, basically it's cool, but imho it will be much better if you add lots of variations, fills, and play around with the delay settings.

the vanishing tide

wow, it's so metal and energetic! still need lots of fills though, right now it feels kind of flat and empty. the strings need to be louder too.

looking forward to your new/updated songs! thanks for sharing
 
you need to work on mastering your songs better, and you need to get a new drumkit, the drums in the second one sound awful.

other than that i like them, the first one sounds a lot more polished than the second one, but both of them are good starts
 
Whispers started off as being very repetitive, but it had a lot of good moments later on. Overall, it felt very professional and had a nice feel to it, but you should cut down on the repetitive beginning section.

The Vanishing Tide is missing something. I agree with clea: it felt kind of flat and empty. It's all good, but it almost sounds like the support to something that isn't there yet. In other words, you need to find something that takes the center stage. It needs to be something strong and maybe light - something that will be in front but maybe doesn't have the same rushy feel to it. That's just my opinion, though.
 
Hm... I listened to these... They seem okay; both have their good points, but then they both need some good thought and feeling put into them.
I think you can do this.
 

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