Fox5's Workshop - Updated 30/3/08

[Luthur]

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/8403/fwlogoxf9.png[/img]

Welcome to my workshop. I'm not the best at spriting by a long way, but I just thought I'd post some of the stuff I am working on here. C&C welcome on all stuff.

News
30/3/08 - I have updated the new shaded sprite. Getting better?
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/8665 ... ingex6.png[/img]
Question: Is it better or worst than my other sprites? Am I getting better? Please post and say what you think.


Completed Stuff - Updated 24/3/08

Spoiler: Completed Stuff

Here is all the stuff I have completed.
Please do not comment on the following - they were my first, and they are rubbish.

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5152/boy2hairqa8.png[/img]
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6347 ... ketxr7.png[/img]
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9191/girlhairiw6.png[/img]
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/311/boyshortsva4.png[/img]

Please comment on the following - They are newer.

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2604 ... terjo3.png[/img]
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5752 ... diton0.png[/img]

WIP - Updated 29/3/08

Spoiler: WIP

Here is all the stuff I am working on. Please don't use any of the stuff here, as its not finished.

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8541/treehl2.png[/img]
Updated - Still not finished. I need to add leaves.
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/743/wallnw2.png[/img]
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/3213 ... tryiq4.png[/img]
Two different types of shading on the armour. I really don't like either of them... any idea whats wrong with them?
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/1743 ... pleqd0.png[/img]
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/6258 ... f03hk0.png[/img]
OK, ignore the first left sprite, I know it looks totally wrong. C&C on the rest, though.
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/4998 ... pleft4.png[/img]
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/1893 ... ouruu6.png[/img]
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/1515 ... iorzv6.png[/img]
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9326 ... werpy5.png[/img]
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1186/wall2ie1.png[/img]
(Wall plaster isn't textured yet.)
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1503 ... plejs3.png[/img]
This is from a drawing I did, this bit isn't quite finished, as he needs a rifle on his back and a pocket added. C&C as always.

Please don't judge them too harshly, as all of them were/are being made in MSPaint. If any daft person out there in desperate enough to use any of these, please credit me, Fox5. Everything WIP will be updated as soon as I have time.

Thanks.

 

[dadevvtsvre]

I'm no spriting expert either, but those are looking good. :thumb: I can't really criticize, as I know nothing about this kind of stuff. But it looks fine to me!

 

[Luthur]

thanks! added a new WIP.

 

[Samboy]

The contrast on the RTP sprites, namedly the first one with the green shirt, has too much contrast.

What I mean by contrast is, the dark colors are too dark, and the light colors are too light.

That's my two cents.

 

[Luthur]

Yeah, thanks, i'd been told that already. i'll get round to fixing them soon :thumb:

 

[Luthur]

Updated - added a complete breeze sprite.

 

[Luthur]

Updated again - added two WIP's: a chinese fighter and a female elf. (Both breeze)
C&C.

 

[Luthur]

Added a recolour and armour edit of 002-Fighter02.

 

[Luthur]

Um, some feedback would be nice...

 

[Luthur]

Come on, someone must have some comments!

 

[Neverplayd]

Hello, fellow MS Paint user. Your work is good, but kind of poorly shaded. That is acceptable when using breeze, but the first two that are in RTP aren't shaded enough. You should use 6 shades(2 highlights, 1 base, 2 shadows, 1 outline) to shade RTP, but you only used 3 for your shirt. You don't have to use 6 always(in fact most of the time, you don't use 6), but some shading could be added. The pants of those 2 characters don't seem attached to the shirt of the character, especially with the second character. I would suggest trimming the pants a few pixels near the top to make it fit the shirt. And your male RTP shirts in general look kind of flat and not shaded enough.
In general, your breeze is pretty well done. I'd like to see you finish Arshes and the Thief. (You might your own whole RTP-Breeze set.) But yeah, this is all coming along well.  :thumb:
(Btw, don't do 2-day Bumps. Two-Day Bumps = Angry Mods)

 

[NoNick]

Can u make a main char for me?
i need it to be with red or brown hair and fighter clothes but not the fat ones(knight armor).
the clothes should be red or silver.:P

 

[Neverplayd]

Err... Wrong topic/subforum, NoNick. Try Resource Requests http://www.rmxp.org/forums/http://dev.rmxp.org/forums/viewforum.php?f=0.0.
And that wouldn't be enough information to get a sprite done for you. (you'd have to use a template: http://www.rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=32106.0)

 

[Luthur]

thanks for all the tips, Neverplayd. Yeah, the first few RTP sprites were my first, and i admit they are pretty rubbish. but i'm getting better as you can see.

and NoNick, if you are really desperate for me to make that sprite, post some more info and I'll have a go.

 

[Luthur]

Updated - Added a 'News' section. Read what I've put there and tell me what you think.

 

[Neverplayd]

Question: Is it better or worst than my other sprites? Am I getting better? Please post and say what you think.

I think its better. -_- Oh and sry. I didn't realize that I formatted my workshop the same way you formatted yours...

 

[rikuken]

Try not pillowshading much, I like the purple dude the best.

 

[Luthur]

I think its better. -_- Oh and sry. I didn't realize that I formatted my workshop the same way you formatted yours...

I'm glad you think so. And I don't care about the formatting so you don't need to apologise.

Try not pillowshading much, I like the purple dude the best.

Which ones are pillow shaded? I hope you mean the older ones...

EDIT: Oh, yeah, adn updated the different shaded sprite.