Final Fantasy XP

[Bob423]

Credits: Blizzard, Sithjester, Vorpal86, Zanyzora, vgmusic.com, and others who I do no know the names of.
I OWN NOTHING!

Games with references or cameos:

Kingdom Hearts
Mega Man X 5
Final Fantasy 7 and 10

:!: The first three "Re" games are remakes of my first rmxp games.
I know what's wrong with them, and i fixed everything i could, so the game would still be the same.
These games are not supposed to be super serious.
I would like only positive things said about these game, since i know what's wrong. if you are going to post things that are wrong with any of the games, list pros. AND cons. :!:
Thank You.

Re: Final Fantasy XP
A boy (you name him) receives a letter from the mayor of a nearby town inviting him yo his house. The boy learns that he must save the four elementals and learn who imprisoned them. The Mayor's Daughter goes with him. along the way, they meet Auron(FFX) and Mage.

Download here
http://alt.hbgames.org/img/upload/REFFXP1.1.zip

Re: Final Fantasy XP II
The world is at peace once again, but after only 6 months, monsters start pouring out of the other temples that weren't in the previous game. The boy goes to defeat the monsters and find out who is responsible for this. along the way he meets Zero (MMX), Cloud Strife, Riku, and Sora (KH).

download here
http://www.mediafire.com/?4ce054e7azde4et

Re: Final Fantasy XP III
Everyone from the previous games returns, except for Riku and Sora. The Aeons from FFX have returned, and The heroes mus defeat Seymour, Sin, and whoever is controlling him.
New Allies: Barret Wallace, Aerith Gainsborough, Yuffie Kisagragi, Tidus, and Jecht

Final Fantasy XP IV
2 years have past since Sehiroth's defeat. The world is at peace once again. 3 hero's are left, the rest have gone home. The player walks to the mayor's house, and finds out that he has been making pottery and sculptures for the king, and he asks you to take some of his work to the castle. Thief goes with you. you are then told to go to the snow town, and ask if "Mage" will to go too. She is sick in bed, but when you leave the house, her brother offers to take her place. After that, you go back to the town and head East instead of the usual West, meaning it will not have all the same maps, and you will be heading for one destination, similar to FFX, but it's not for most of the game. There is a surprise waiting at the castle town.

 

[moog]

Wow. um, these are really bad. you should work on your mapping and overall grammar. holy shit. I would suggest start something small and then work on it for a long time and not a couple of hours.

 

[Perihelion]

Could you post more screenshots, please?

 

[Jason]

MORE screenshots, how about posting SOME screenshots first?

... Or am I missing something? Because I see no screenshots o.O

 

[udivision]

Hmm, this guy was on RPG Revolution too...
He's made 7 games, none of them any good.

As tempting as it is, don't get all worked up over this guy. He's not very good and extremely defensive, not really a good mix.
Instead of posting malicious spam, why dont you post something constructive? This isnt very helpful or is it nice. Verbal warning ~moog

 

[Bob423]

Wow. um, these are really bad. you should work on your mapping and overall grammar. holy shit. I would suggest start something small and then work on it for a long time and not a couple of hours.

thanks :grin: your really nice.

whay should i give screenshots? there isn't much to look at. the mapping has improved a ton, i don't see what you're complaining about. and as for the grammer, well, just don't bring it up again.

and please read the first post before posting anything

 

[Bob423]

Hmm, this guy was on RPG Revolution too...
He's made 7 games, none of them any good.

As tempting as it is, don't get all worked up over this guy. He's not very good and extremely defensive, not really a good mix.

leave me alone.
why done' you give me a chance, i wanted a clean slate, but you ruined my chances of ever being liked on this forum. thanks.

 

[Perihelion]

You should post screenshots because they're a requirement for this forum and I'm going to lock your thread if you don't. :p

 

[Bob423]

alright, i posted a couple

 

[moog]

I understand these are your first games but if you continue to act like a spoiled brat im going to lock this thread. I played the games and there isnt much positive to say except good job for finishing these games, although it doesnt take much effort to do what youve done to be fairly honest. Take the crits in stride and use the advice, albeit harsh, to make a better project.

 

[moog]

Also Im gonna back Bob up on one thing. If you come in here to post something rude or offensive without some sort of critical feedback, youre getting warned. Dont bandwagon with "OMG THE SCREENS" or something if it has already been said.

 

[Bob423]

on rmxpu, people have said that my games aren't that bad, but everywhere else, people think they suck. and if your going to be a moderator, you should at least be nice, or noops will never want to come here.

 

[moog]

They arent very good, man. Im not saying youre a terrible person or are stupid or anything. This is not a doctors office. We are here to provide criticism to better your game. Your mapping is bland, the dialog is one-dimensional and the grammar is atrocious.

What you fail to grasp, however, is a general understanding of maturity. If you are going to post something you made on the internet, be prepared to realize that everyone differs with what you might think. Im not sure you have that yet, seeing as you attacked everyone who has posted here.

You should at least thank me, so far I am the only one here who has taken the time to download and play your game, and seeing as I am a musician, I hardly have time for RM games. I even backed you up to the fact that people should not just flame you but should provide decent criticism, which so far I am the only one who has said anything.

Now, with that said, you really need to relax. Post around, you will see this is a friendly community. Maybe post an intro? There are alot of feedbaack and critique forums here as well, if you want to post your storyline ideas for your games to get more power.

When you fall down, just get back up and try again. Making 6 or 7 games with the same exact style and bad habits wont progressively help you get better.

 

[Bob423]

actually, they don't have the same problems, i've been getting better, but i do appreciate that you stood up for me and stuff.
like i said, these games are not supposed to be serious, so they aren't going to have the best grammar. The grammar is also a very small part of it, so i would like it if you would focus on things that are more important, like the mapping that isn't as bad as you say, i really don't see what's wrong with it, although i could improve it. as for the story, i know i need to improve on that.
and how many times do i have to say I know whats wrong with these games?

 

[mawk]

It doesn't matter if you know what's wrong with the games if you don't apply the knowledge and use it to improve. Keep in mind that .ORG and the other game-making forums out there are here to provide criticism and help people to get better at whatever it is they're choosing to do - if you know what's wrong but choose not to fix it because it's "not a serious project", then why are you posting it in a community of developers? Of course they're going to let you know what you've done wrong!

 

[Tuna]

moog is my hero.

Unfortunately, I'm going to have to agree with the rest of he hecklers. These screenshots are a pretty good summary of my play through.

Spoiler: screens

 

[Bob423]

with that last one, i meant to have him talk like that, it's supposed to be funny.
and i have better stuff to do than to try to please people who haven't even said a single nice thing to me, or about the game, or anyone for that matter. now, if you were my friend, or wanted only one simple thing fixed, and not the whole thing, it would be different.

 

[Tuna]

If you want to improve your mapping, I suggest you start here.

viewtopic.php?f=48&t=51293

 

[moog]

actually, they don't have the same problems, i've been getting better, but i do appreciate that you stood up for me and stuff.
like i said, these games are not supposed to be serious, so they aren't going to have the best grammar. The grammar is also a very small part of it, so i would like it if you would focus on things that are more important, like the mapping that isn't as bad as you say, i really don't see what's wrong with it, although i could improve it. as for the story, i know i need to improve on that.
and how many times do i have to say I know whats wrong with these games?

The mapping isnt horrible, its just very bland. And yeah as mawk said it doesnt matter, you post it here so we can critique and help you get better. If you know whats wrong with the games why do you post them? Doesnt make sense.

 

[Bob423]

for the last time, i don't need anyone to help me with my mapping.