Final Boss Metal Piece + guitar tab!

[Blueberry]

This is my first effective piece with has a beggining, a middle and a end. I create all my songs with guitar pro or Sibelius 4, meaning i composed this music one note at a time, unlike people using garage band or something which mixes already made pieces together . I have been playing the guitar for 1 year, i still gota lot to learn....

main influences are:
Metallica (Kirk Hammett)
Jimi hendrix Experience (Jimi Hendrix, duh  :tongue

Final Breath-
In my opinion, a awesome  metal piece with (in my opinion) a guitar solo which sounds pretty damn cool. I think this piece is sensible for boss battles. If you do download give me some comments for improvement!




download:
Midi - http://www.fileqube.com/hl/ehOmBtiA83260/Final Breath2.mid
Guitar Tab (Guitar Pro) -http://www.fileqube.com/hl/fPVmGP83259/Final Breath.gp5
Guitar tab (text form) - http://www.fileqube.com/hl/VaqfoQX83261/final breath.txt
that fast part at the 2nd solo is tapping but you could try pulling off and hammering with 3 fingers, which makes it easier to go faster...
More songs coming, but my box.net isnt working for me right now :crazy:

 

[Icedevimon13]

The opening line of the piece seems a bit too repetitive and drawn out. Maybe cut out a second or two? It sounds good, but just goes on a bit too long for me. The part at 1:57 seems a little out of place compared to the rest of the music, I think it's the really, really odd keys that it's in. Finally, the ending could use a little work. It's too short I think and ends a bit abruptly. Or maybe it's that the last note is higher than the previous few. Maybe it would sound better lower.

I like the line at :37 and 1:04. I know I didn't put a lot of what I liked, but overall I think this is a pretty good piece. It's got a pretty good recurring melody, and for the most part flows between the sub-melody and the melody well. If this gets polished a little more I'd probably make use of it.

 

[Shizu]

Final Boss battle pieces, in the majority or all RPG's need to feel epic, and rock/metal is a great addition to final boss battles but what you have is a slice of what boss battles are. Other than its bass, it's also missing the "RPG" setup. Listen to some RPG OST's and listen to the instruments that they use to get more of the feel of it and try to incorporate your style into it.

 

[Blueberry]

thanks guy ill update it soon
adding bass
fix key of the second guitar solo. (maybe replac it with bass :tongue:?)

The opening line of the piece seems a bit too repetitive and drawn out. Maybe cut out a second or two? It sounds good, but just goes on a bit too long for me. The part at 1:57 seems a little out of place compared to the rest of the music, I think it's the really, really odd keys that it's in. Finally, the ending could use a little work. It's too short I think and ends a bit abruptly. Or maybe it's that the last note is higher than the previous few. Maybe it would sound better lower.

I like the line at :37 and 1:04. I know I didn't put a lot of what I liked, but overall I think this is a pretty good piece. It's got a pretty good recurring melody, and for the most part flows between the sub-melody and the melody well. If this gets polished a little more I'd probably make use of it.

i think i might shorten the start as well, but its like the part when you see the final boss, before you vs him.

Final Boss battle pieces, in the majority or all RPG's need to feel epic, and rock/metal is a great addition to final boss battles but what you have is a slice of what boss battles are. Other than its bass, it's also missing the "RPG" setup. Listen to some RPG OST's and listen to the instruments that they use to get more of the feel of it and try to incorporate your style into it.

im gonna try adding bass  :lol:

 

[Blueberry]

alright, guitar tab added and fixed the parts without a key and added bass....

oh yeah, and completely changed the begginning