Fantasy Life Sprites Breeze Style- rate me please (PA)

[rikuken]

I made a charsheet for my main character in my game.
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj27 ... ga1s-1.png[/img]
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj27 ... arga2s.png[/img]
I just recently finished and this is the best charsheet I ever made, I used Breeze for this.
I'm using this as the main char in my game if any of you wanna help me make some of my chars, or fill in some jobs go here. index.php?topic=39481.0

 

[Jason]

Lol you flipped the top right frame, you can tell by the head, you shouldn't flip the head if it has a fringe like that, can you see what I mean ?

Other than that it looks good

 

[rikuken]

Lol you flipped the top right frame, you can tell by the head, you shouldn't flip the head if it has a fringe like that, can you see what I mean ?

Other than that it looks good

oops ya lol.  i just did that to save time ill fix it.

 

[rikuken]

Finished another character, Fixed the other one.
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj27 ... arga2s.png[/img]

 

[Jason]

The first one still needs doing, lol, you need to reupload if you've fixed it.
They both look good :thumb:

 

[rikuken]

The first one still needs doing, lol, you need to reupload if you've fixed it.
They both look good :thumb:

I did reupload them the hair is facing the same way.

 

[Jason]

Now it is lol, you only just did it

« Last Edit: Today at 10:40:05 pm by rikuken »

Hehe, looking good anyways

 

[rikuken]

Now it is lol, you only just did it

« Last Edit: Today at 10:40:05 pm by rikuken »

Hehe, looking good anyways

Thank you, I'm about to start another character.

 

[Dawne]

The hair on the second one has the same problem that jbrist pointed out :huh:

 

[rikuken]

The hair on the second one has the same problem that jbrist pointed out :huh:

Ugh...XD I just noticed that lol. I'll fix it right away.

 

[Clizzz]

Yeah, you have to be careful when flipping a Breeze Character with a one-sided or special hairdo. Besides that, AWSME! You give me hope that one day, BREEZE SHALL RULE THE EARTH!!! *Cough* got carried away there ... Any who, good job and keep up the good work!

 

[rikuken]

Yeah, you have to be careful when flipping a Breeze Character with a one-sided or special hairdo. Besides that, AWSME! You give me hope that one day, BREEZE SHALL RULE THE EARTH!!! *Cough* got carried away there ... Any who, good job and keep up the good work!

Ya, they will! Breeze Rulez!

 

[Venetia]

They're very cute, but the first guy's hair is overly-detailed in the backview, and the girl's hair is under-detailed in the backview.

The boy seems to have asymmetrical hair when looking at him at the frontview, but on the sideviews, his bangs look the same (covering the eye).

The girl's hair, in the back, is incredibly flat.

There's no shading on the skin under the hairlines.

But nice work, keep going :thumb:

 

[rikuken]

They're very cute, but the first guy's hair is overly-detailed in the backview, and the girl's hair is under-detailed in the backview.

The boy seems to have asymmetrical hair when looking at him at the frontview, but on the sideviews, his bangs look the same (covering the eye).

The girl's hair, in the back, is incredibly flat.

There's no shading on the skin under the hairlines.

But nice work, keep going :thumb:

Thank you, I'll try to fix my sprites when I have time.