Fallen from Grace/Watery Grave

[Arcanum]

I've been doing alot composing lately, and I also recently got Reason, so, I figured I might as well celebrate my getting it by making an electronica-esque song. It was originally intended to be for an underwater dungeon or something like that, but I think I ended up making it a little too epic for that sort of thing... anyway, tell me what you think:
Fallen From Grace/Watery Grave.
I didn't spend too long on it at all, just about 2 or 3 hours today, hence the incredibly simple progression.

 

[l3lind3d]

Cool, that's very nice. I really like it, especially when the voice kicked in. However, I think it could've used a little more complexity.

 

[Seefour]

I think it sounds good, I like simple progressions myself.

The choir/voice thing kind of drowns almost everything else out at about 3/4 of the way through the song, while I like the dynamic effect it has on the song, mabey you can pan it out a bit more or decrease the volume very slightly. Or increase the other instrument's volume during that part, but that part sounds busy enough, so a slight decrease might be more appropriate.