-F- Falcon

[Ellie]

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Falcon is an RMXP anime series I am making. The concept is similar to that of Akasha Seal or other RMXP series'. Falcon is a Science Fiction anime, based around an entirely new galaxy.

EPISODE I - Inevitability

Not much of the storyline is explained in this pilot episode, it is generally to start off the story and introduce one of the main characters. This episode introduces us to the world of Falcon.

It's a busy day at work, and there is a lot to be done, especially as a Sys-Com worker. But when an armed terrorist threatens the largest and most prominent software development country in the entire galaxy, worker *name to be announced* is sent on the run...

The link should work.

http://afarrpg.freepgs.com/SCIFI.exe

Credits are in-game at the end.
THIS IS NOT A "GAME", it is an... episodical? project.

Spoiler: Screenshots

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EPISODE II - Retribution

Coming soon...

 

[Jstreet]

To be honest, you wasted your time posting this. You got too anxious or something, but you have absolutely NOTHING basically. No story, no characters, no plot, no music o.O, there's not even anything to comment and/or critique. You make a safer bet having this topic deleted, and keeping the project under wraps until you have something to show.

 

[Ellie]

Damn it. I forgot to get rid of an event, it's supposed to be longer - much longer than that...

Sorry about that, I'll upload it again when I finish ep 1.

 

[Ellie]

How's this so far?

I replaced the graphics with KnightBlade stuff. Credit for graphics and sound = KnightBlade.

Same link as before:

http://afarrpg.freepgs.com/SCIFI.exe

Note: Episode 1 is still nowhere near complete btw.

 

[Ellie]

Edit:
To Lene:
Sorry, my PC sorta crashed when I sent the report and so I didn't think it sent it. I figured it was OK to make a new thread... I posted this thread before I got your PM.

 

[Jstreet]

Watch it sadly, I was not impressed.
-Message go by too fast.
-There's (as you said) no story.
-Still seems rushed.

This is a BAD way to introduce your project. If the first episode isn't good, then what would make us want to watch the second? You might want to look at the prologs of some of the more popular RMXP shows around the community.