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Everwind Chronicles - New Stuff!

Mediafire says:

Plenty of people have downloaded, so why no comments?


Xephyr says:

I don't know.



Xephyr says:

There should be another update soon with a save point near the Lenksol Leaf's location.  Look forward to it!  The game is coming along lovely and I would say the next demo might be around 2 hours long, depending on how the puzzles I'm designing work out.
 
The story seems pretty short, and it's not the most original one I've seen (though I cannot say I can do better myself). Yet, it has its qualities, and if done right, it can result in an interesting game.

There's really not much to comment on apart from the battle system and your maps. The battle system looks nice, but in what ways does it appear different? Are the challenges good? Do we get to see more than just an actor running back and forth from his/her initial standpoint to the enemies?

In all honesty I haven't played the demo yet, but by the look of the topic it doesn't inspire me to play it, even though it might turn out really good. Try to pop in as much information about your game as you can without people having to play your demo for it.
 
New screenshots and new demo added.





EDIT:

By the way i left the demo unencrypted.  If you find an error or something you can try to fix it yourself.  It's easier this way.  Next demos will not be unencrypted.


EDIT 2:
Don't play my save file.  Your trapped there anyway its pretty much a waste.  I forgot to delete it.
 
Already by seeing your screenshots I could see that mapping isnt your strongest point

xephyr14":1gi96yad said:
By the way i left the demo unencrypted
Epic solution!
Changed all characters to level 99 w00t!


Ok, played the second version fo the demo

You should Start at a blank map so the character doesnt change direction in-game(just being picky though)

To many fights for such a simple battle system(cant imagine how this whould be in the initial level)... makes the dungeon boring and tedious
You should edit the battle system script or battlers to eliminate the doble shadow of the flying monsters

Remember that you can make the messeage window appear at the top or bottom of the screen, sometimes it blocks the action

So...

The structure of the game is lame. You used the standar rtp, there isnt a single edit. The music did not help the flow of the game.... overall there was an awkward feeling through out all of the game

The story had inmense potencial, you went beyond the cliche of the memory by including the villian in the dance. It whould have been nice to see them travel together, bonding at some time just to find out that they all were enemys... but that didnt happen

Lame solution for the "monster could be to though for them"

It just wasnt funny... maybe with a comic ME you could save it

xephyr14":1gi96yad said:
If you find an error or something you can try to fix it yourself
Screw you I`m not doing your job!
 
Avadan":3vihv742 said:
Already by seeing your screenshots I could see that mapping isnt your strongest point

xephyr14":3vihv742 said:
By the way i left the demo unencrypted
Epic solution!
Changed all characters to level 99 w00t!


Ok, played the second version fo the demo

You should Start at a blank map so the character doesnt change direction in-game(just being picky though)

To many fights for such a simple battle system(cant imagine how this whould be in the initial level)... makes the dungeon boring and tedious
You should edit the battle system script or battlers to eliminate the doble shadow of the flying monsters

Remember that you can make the messeage window appear at the top or bottom of the screen, sometimes it blocks the action

So...

The structure of the game is lame. You used the standar rtp, there isnt a single edit. The music did not help the flow of the game.... overall there was an awkward feeling through out all of the game

The story had inmense potencial, you went beyond the cliche of the memory by including the villian in the dance. It whould have been nice to see them travel together, bonding at some time just to find out that they all were enemys... but that didnt happen

Lame solution for the "monster could be to though for them"

xephyr14":3vihv742 said:
If you find an error or something you can try to fix it yourself
Screw you I`m not doing your job!


I lol'd pretty hard.

i'm gonna start off by bashing your project, because ive always thought it looked really gay but never bothered to post.

"Wait...are you saying his brain was sucked out through his eyes?"

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y22/Av ... SSLVX8.png

lol.  what the fuck.






Okay, moving along.



What's wrong with my maps?  If you'd like you could add me to msn or something then I could show you some of my maps.  Then you'll shut up.

Did you even play past the first 3 maps?  Besides, how are the maps bad?  The only truly bad map in my opinion is the second one or whatever that's just a huge maze.


Are you too much of a pansy to play my game without cheating?


Remember that you can make the messeage window appear at the top or bottom of the screen, sometimes it blocks the action


there's action at the top of the screen too dumbass.  what do i do?  I block out the less interesting stuff.


The story had inmense potencial, you went beyond the cliche of the memory by including the villian in the dance. It whould have been nice to see them travel together, bonding at some time just to find out that they all were enemys... but that didnt happen

What?  Do you understand anything?  Vrelick isn't even a villian your heroes are the villians.  If that makes any sense.  And if you realized this is a DEMO you wouldn't be jumping to conclusions.  For the record, Vrelick joins the party really close to after the end of the demo. 


Screw you I`m not doing your job!


No, screw you.  So if you find a bug you would rather me fix it and have you wait an hour for me to reupload instead of you fixing yourself?  Are you a dumbass?  Don't answer that question.


The structure of the game is lame. You used the standar rtp, there isnt a single edit. The music did not help the flow of the game.... overall there was an awkward feeling through out all of the game

Awkward feeling?  What the fuck?  What the FUCK does that mean?  I don't understand how there could be an awkward feeling at ALL. 



I'm done.  Maybe you can give me more to flame in your reply =D
 
xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
The only truly bad map in my opinion is the second one or whatever that's just a huge maze.
Yeah you are right the citadel is beautiful... a piece of art, loved how you choped the tree down therehttp://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y ... AAAMEE.png[/img]


xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
Are you too much of a pansy to play my game without cheating?
Yes... thats exactly it

xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
there's action at the top of the screen too dumbass.  what do i do?
Then you move the messeage window down again you smart smart smart man


xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
What?  Do you understand anything?  Vrelick isn't even a villian your heroes are the villians.  If that makes any sense.  And if you realized this is a DEMO you wouldn't be jumping to conclusions.  For the record, Vrelick joins the party really close to after the end of the demo. 
Ups my bad.... though I never read the thread... just went and played the game... and if it was said in the game, must have missed it cuz of how compeling and good the story was

xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
No, screw you.  So if you find a bug you would rather me fix it and have you wait an hour for me to reupload instead of you fixing yourself?
Yes!
Cuz not everyone will repair the error, they will propabably stop playing

xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
Awkward feeling?  What the fuck?  What the FUCK does that mean?  I don't understand how there could be an awkward feeling at ALL. 
.... eeeerh... you got me there

xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
I'm done.  Maybe you can give me more to flame in your reply =D

jeez I just tried reply to this... almost made me cry
xephyr14":e8mhqq2d said:
Plenty of people have downloaded, so why no comments?
 
Wow xephyr14, you took Avadan's nice criticism so horribly.

I went over the thread earlier and left some CC earlier so I'll just talk about your project demo.  I didn't play it, but instead opened the unencrypted version to see the "innerworkings" of your demo.  All I've gotta say is I was extremely unimpressed.  Mapping is somewhat below decent and you have all RTP except for the battle system.  Maybe later I'll play the demo and say how bad/good it was.

Also, what the fuck is this?
xephyr14":dx6x4u7l said:
i'm gonna start off by bashing your project, because ive always thought it looked really gay but never bothered to post.

"Wait...are you saying his brain was sucked out through his eyes?"

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y22/Av ... SSLVX8.png

lol.  what the fuck.

....

I'm done.  Maybe you can give me more to flame in your reply =D

Avadan DID NOT flame you.  Why the hell are you doing it to him?  Even more, you're flaming his project in your thread.  You can't take negative criticism?  He even sprinkled his post by saying "Already by seeing your screenshots I could see that mapping isnt your strongest point" instead of "Already by seeing your screenshots I could see that your mapping sucks".

Take a chill pill kid, seriously.  Loosen up and learn the difference between flaming and negative criticism.
 
Xephyr you are getting a verbal warning.  Do not flame people who are giving you honest feedback.  Next time you flame it will be your first official warning.  Seriously don't you want people to take the time to help you improve?
 
He had caught me in a bad mood already not to mention

Epic solution!
Changed all characters to level 99 w00t!
Screw you I`m not doing your job!
To many fights for such a simple battle system


A. He cheated his way through it, which would first of all make the game less enjoyable, wouldn't it?
B. Yeah, never ever say "screw you" to me.
C. Okay, link me to any other VX battle system other than an ABS then I'll change it.


A was idiotic, B was ignorant, C was utterly clueless.
 
A. He cheated his way through it, which would first of all make the game less enjoyable, wouldn't it?
B. Yeah, never ever say "screw you" to me.
C. Okay, link me to any other VX battle system other than an ABS then I'll change it.

that was joking, you moron

he can say whatever he wants to you?

shut up.

A was stupid, B was retarded, and C made me wanna vomit in your eye sockets. Stop acting like he was flaming you when he wasn't.
 
vomit in your eye sockets


i saw a movie once where that happened.  it was called like Slaughtered Vomit Dolls or something along those lines.  check youtube its worth it.


its not that he was flaming me, its just that he was a bitch in the way he critisized you.


Seriously don't you want people to take the time to help you improve?


not really when they basically tell you "you suck"
 
It's constructive criticism stop bitching about it? He tried to help you improve and you just SPAT IN HIS FACE! That's a major turn-off for people who might play your game.
 
It's called using a question mark to indicate an upward inflection? I dont have to follow the rules of English if i dont want to.

And you are being a hugely massive faggot

To many fights for such a simple battle system(cant imagine how this whould be in the initial level)... makes the dungeon boring and tedious
You should edit the battle system script or battlers to eliminate the doble shadow of the flying monsters
Remember that you can make the messeage window appear at the top or bottom of the screen, sometimes it blocks the action
The structure of the game is lame. You used the standar rtp, there isnt a single edit. The music did not help the flow of the game.... overall there was an awkward feeling through out all of the game
The story had inmense potencial, you went beyond the cliche of the memory by including the villian in the dance. It whould have been nice to see them travel together, bonding at some time just to find out that they all were enemys... but that didnt happen

i mean MY GOD i dont think ive ever seen anybody so unreceptive to constructive criticism. i suggest you adjust your attitude, mister!
 
i suggest you adjust your attitude, mister!

lol

only the first two quotes had anything to do with a suggestion, and i cant script and i cant edit battlers.

besides, i editted my post.  perhaps you entered before i editted.  the point was to shut us all up.
 
people dont have to SUGGEST anything! they can tell you whats wrong or whats bad. YOU are the one who needs to figure out how to sort it the fuck out.

and if you cant except constructive criticism then perhaps you should reconsider keeping a project thread here.
 
Wow Fight's are annoying...
How about you chillax and watch some charlie the unicorn or something...
If not? Go lick a toilet omfg

It'd be nice if you didn't make comments like this in the future. As funny as it is, it's totally unnecessary. Thanks.
Luminier
 

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