[Eternal Grace] Character Design

[jasprelao]

I am jasprelao, the developer of an ongoing RMXP game titled "Eternal Grace"

Those are the character designs of the playable characters of Eternal Grace with some of their description...

Millia Melody

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Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Origin: Dive Village
She is a special agent of SOFRA (Soldiers Organization For Recovery Attemption) that has duty to search potential people to join REPRO (REcovery PROject). She is cheerful and sociable, optimistic and always try to solve the problems well. She is a great ranger who could use ranged weapon very well, as well as her instinct to search people whom shee needs. She experienced a very hard live in SOFRA, so that she could hide her true feelings fluently.

She often too clumsy and forgetful especially for people identity, this make her always brings a notebook. Before she
become SOFRA's agent, Millia had sorrowful past and all of her obscure memories are written in a lost notebook. She could raise up from her worst time and now become a girl that has a willing to recover her beloved planet by inviting people to join REPRO, although she doesn't have any idea how REPRO works.

Razh Avandrey

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Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Origin: Unknown
A mercenary who always serious and always try to finish his job whithout think about the risk. However, in a mission, his justice instinct made him defied his client. The mission is to kill a little child who determined to be a disaster in Enthrea. Although he killed everyone else beside that child. After that incident, he was infected by an unknown virus that made him has more than a memory at once. The disesase is called MEMODIS (MEMOry DISsorder). The disease made him confused about which one is his real memory. Nowadays Razh is a most wanted mercenary. Some of them want to hire him, and the others want to eliminate him.

Razh met Millia when that girl needs some help. After that Millia invited Razh to join REPRO. After a several events, Razh join Millia because he feel there is a memory that connected with that cheerful and clumsy girl although he did it for something called money before.

Renavia Amartha

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Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Half - Revan
Origin: Amarthia Kingdom
She is the only daughter of Amarthia kingdom that doesn't like to live inside the palace. her relationship eith the palace people isn't very well and her relatives are hate her. However, those problems didn't make her down, but this soft and gentle princess has a very good relationship with the people outside the palace especially poor and ordinary ones. She always try to help the people from suffers and the disaster that almost everytime occured in Enthrea, so that many people loves her very much.

But, her kindness often made her entered the traps, however, she always consider every people as kind and nice one. On the other side, she had a curse that often made her thinks to commit suicide before the curse make people suffer. When Millia asked her to join REPRO, she confirmed it quickly, because with her deeds in REPRO, she expects that she can help many people, before the curse become reality.

The game will be released in 2010 and I hope it become a marvelous game...
Please give me feedback and comments about the character design...
Thanks...

 

[jasprelao]

Reserved for Important non-playable character design

 

[jasprelao]

Reserved for Important non-playable character design

 

[Gulch666]

first off "Attemption" is not a word.

now on to your art. not bad, but its very dbz fanart looking to me. as with most people i comment on here at .org, i would suggest you do some life drawing, your anatomy could use some work. but not a bad start.

also, with your coloring, it looks like you used a lot of "dodge" for the shading. youre much better off picking your colors more true to the way colors are effected by darks and lights, i would look up some coloring tutorials for refference