Eternal chaos

[kenshen]

Story: it starts in a small town with a boy named Yukishiro his town neighbors two big cities his fellow towns people have jobs in each different city but then live there not sure the name of the kingdoms any dang way one day while Yukishiro was walking on his way home he passed a man who didn't feel right to Yukishiro but he continued on his way home as usual he ate supper and went off to bed and had a strange dream about some strange group gathering and reviving there old lord who was said to be all powerful he was so powerful that even the gods feared him and then Yukishiro saw a great warrior enveloped in light defeating the God of war and death thats all so far that i can right in this paragraph there's more pm me if you want to here the rest

Screen shots none yet and such

 

[dadevvtsvre]

No.

This is not nearly enough information for a topic here-take a look at the rules. You're going to need to add at least 2 screenshots and preferably more information on your game.

Please update your topic with the necessary substance or I will have to lock it. If you have no screenshots or haven't started developing your game then it would be best to not make a topic until you can give us some screenshots.

 

[kenshen]

No.

This is not nearly enough information for a topic here-take a look at the rules. You're going to need to add at least 2 screenshots and preferably more information on your game.

Please update your topic with the necessary substance or I will have to lock it. If you have no screenshots or haven't started developing your game then it would be best to not make a topic until you can give us some screenshots.

Ok Sorry I Will Post Some Screens Later

 

[killergermel]

Your story is great and readable!!..... NOT!!!
What does the old man has to do with anything in the plot? does the old lord is the warrior? and stop writing the same way you talk! eleborate and exapand about....... everything!! if you want me to explain to you how to eleborate about the characters and plot PM me but don't leave us hanging there with no background story or the main goal of the game....

 

[dadevvtsvre]

It's been five days and still no screenshots. I'm gonna have to lock it.

kenshen, if you want this topic re-opened, please PM me with screenshots of the game and I will unlock it.