I need help + your opinion on my character:
Elodie de Vries
- girl 17 years old
- she study magic in academy /i have little different concept than usual commercial fireball like magic - make light or simple fireball - its only craft but when you come on higher levels you can lost your mind or soul/
- she is great in theory - but in practice no /after one accident her nick name is mousekiller/ - she hope she will work in library in future or in some kind of sisterhood/ as nun
-later she will become great mage - she is very specific and her manipulation with energy is different from another wizzards - she is half human half veela and specialization is fire magic transformations and necromancy
-she is intelligent, pure, inquistive, emotional and very shy in the begining of story later she will try to look more independent mysterious, and strong secretive /how main character will see her/ - like someone who knows what to do and why
-she has only few friends, but she will gave live for them
-when she was small she fall and had broken leg - still have fear from high places
-she has weak constitution - after really hard spell she has nose bled
-she will be in story something like investigator or maybe one time double agent - she will be executed in trial ...
What do you think about her - is she good designed character/ or no/ or what to change/ make better/ is she clichéd .... your opinion anything thx :smile:
Elodie de Vries
- girl 17 years old
- she study magic in academy /i have little different concept than usual commercial fireball like magic - make light or simple fireball - its only craft but when you come on higher levels you can lost your mind or soul/
- she is great in theory - but in practice no /after one accident her nick name is mousekiller/ - she hope she will work in library in future or in some kind of sisterhood/ as nun
-later she will become great mage - she is very specific and her manipulation with energy is different from another wizzards - she is half human half veela and specialization is fire magic transformations and necromancy
-she is intelligent, pure, inquistive, emotional and very shy in the begining of story later she will try to look more independent mysterious, and strong secretive /how main character will see her/ - like someone who knows what to do and why
-she has only few friends, but she will gave live for them
-when she was small she fall and had broken leg - still have fear from high places
-she has weak constitution - after really hard spell she has nose bled
-she will be in story something like investigator or maybe one time double agent - she will be executed in trial ...
What do you think about her - is she good designed character/ or no/ or what to change/ make better/ is she clichéd .... your opinion anything thx :smile:
