Dead Content DVT: Season 1 Finished.
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clive owen's secret identity
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Very nice ep. Speedpaws, can't wait to see what happens next.
That was a very technically impressive episode Speedpaws. I was particularly impressed with the AIM simulation. It didn't have as much action as the previous episodes but covering the neutral characters was an interesting addition.
I worry that there may be too large of a cast though. I am already getting confused with so many names to remember. I would stop introducing new characters and focus more on the cast so far. Some of the scenes also felt like they were dragging (Cid and the neutral talking about the location of their base). I like the casual feel of the dialogue but some conversations probably could be shortened to speed up the pacing.
Domain has been a fun series to watch so far. I hope the story will pick up soon. Also I would suggest to people watching to have a pencil and paper ready if they want to catch the bonus content.
I worry that there may be too large of a cast though. I am already getting confused with so many names to remember. I would stop introducing new characters and focus more on the cast so far. Some of the scenes also felt like they were dragging (Cid and the neutral talking about the location of their base). I like the casual feel of the dialogue but some conversations probably could be shortened to speed up the pacing.
Domain has been a fun series to watch so far. I hope the story will pick up soon. Also I would suggest to people watching to have a pencil and paper ready if they want to catch the bonus content.
Thx, and I know there are a few graphical errors, my plan is that once the first 5 episodes are out, ill go back and fix everything up at one time, that way I don't spend hours working on one episode, uploading it, and finding more errors :P but dont worry, the characters won't increase for now, at least for the next couple episodes, and people are going to die, so there are a few less names for you to remember. =D
Sobeman459
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I loved it. Simply great. Keep up the good work.
Granas3 REMIXED
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Is there any reason why Megaupload takes 2 hrs, and Artbanes upload takes 16 minutes? I'm dloading both, but if theres no difference, then i'd rather not wait for megaupload :P
Edit: I've watched it now. Din't see anything tha looked like it might be secret though, but one thing has me confused:
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n133/Granas3/beh.jpg[/IMG]
I added my avatar to te screen, but i'm still not to sure: did you stumble across a similar combination to my avatar, or recolor it? It's fine if you did. Actually, i'd prefer that :D
Edit: I've watched it now. Din't see anything tha looked like it might be secret though, but one thing has me confused:
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n133/Granas3/beh.jpg[/IMG]
I added my avatar to te screen, but i'm still not to sure: did you stumble across a similar combination to my avatar, or recolor it? It's fine if you did. Actually, i'd prefer that :D
Weird! O.o I just recolored an rtp sprite, Recolored his hair and clothes :P
also I think I might have frakensprited the head to that body, but i had no idea it was your combo o.o
Also, the episode 3 downloads are the same, I just uploaded to megauploads and Artbane downloaded that and uploaded to his site. THX ARTBANE! :D
also I think I might have frakensprited the head to that body, but i had no idea it was your combo o.o
Also, the episode 3 downloads are the same, I just uploaded to megauploads and Artbane downloaded that and uploaded to his site. THX ARTBANE! :D
The plot thickens! I love the way you portray the characters. I'm interested to see what happens next. The secret you enclosed was very interesting, although it look me a while to realize that it was there. I look forward to seeing the next episode.
I think there's still room for improvement. The message boxes take too long to close in some dialoges. You should reduce the time the short messages stay up. Also, some of the dialoge seems uninspired.
For example...
I think there's still room for improvement. The message boxes take too long to close in some dialoges. You should reduce the time the short messages stay up. Also, some of the dialoge seems uninspired.
For example...
When April learns of Avalon and Nick's death, she really doesn't react very strongly. She should at least be surprised to know that some of the best rebel members were just slain. The same goes for Cid and Volrath who don't seem to care.
Twin Matrix
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Episode 2 and 3 are awesome. ^_^
Hopefully you are planning on continuing this? If not, you should at least make a "crash episode". A crash episode is a quick and quirky ending to a game/series, because the maker no longer has motivating to continue working on it. It is meant to at least slightly satisfy the loyal fans. I'd feel quite screwed over if this series doesn't get an ending. Spending so much time watching those episodes over and over again, and then not getting an end. And don't come up with "Of course I'm going to finish this!" because 99/100 of the times, something doesn't get completely finished. HOWEVER, you should consider a "crash episode", if you find your motication in working on the game gone. Thansk!
Hopefully you are planning on continuing this? If not, you should at least make a "crash episode". A crash episode is a quick and quirky ending to a game/series, because the maker no longer has motivating to continue working on it. It is meant to at least slightly satisfy the loyal fans. I'd feel quite screwed over if this series doesn't get an ending. Spending so much time watching those episodes over and over again, and then not getting an end. And don't come up with "Of course I'm going to finish this!" because 99/100 of the times, something doesn't get completely finished. HOWEVER, you should consider a "crash episode", if you find your motication in working on the game gone. Thansk!
Twin Matrix
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Yea yea, that's what they all say. =P Just keep a crash episode in mind.
lol its funny how you think I would quit this :P No way would I quit. I might take a break now and then, but I would never ever fully quit. Oh and I created a "Which character are you most like?" Quiz. To take it click here or you can always click on the link which I'm going to put on the front page. Put it in your sig if you want lol.
Twin Matrix
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<table border='0' cellpadding='5' cellspacing='0' width='600'><tr><td><img src='http://quizfarm.com/images/1168476562artbane.PNG'></td><td> You scored as <b>Artbane</b>. Like Artbane, you love exploring unknown places and don't fear what you might come across. You are loyal to your friends and you love making new ones.
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<a href='http://quizfarm.com/test.php?q_id=294615'>Which Domain Character are you?</a>
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I must say that I think the quiz was written surprisingly well. I agreed on almost everyone of them. o.O
But the code doesn't work in a post... ;_; *points up*
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<a href='http://quizfarm.com/test.php?q_id=294615'>Which Domain Character are you?</a>
<font face='Arial' size='1'>created with <a href='http://quizfarm.com'>QuizFarm.com</a></font></table>
I must say that I think the quiz was written surprisingly well. I agreed on almost everyone of them. o.O
But the code doesn't work in a post... ;_; *points up*
i noticed that myself... I don't know why the heck it's not working. O.o I might have to find another quiz maker thing to do it saddly. I don't think the forum supports that code.
I was hoping I could find someone who knows flash or something to create the test and I would put it up once I get a website for Domain.
I was hoping I could find someone who knows flash or something to create the test and I would put it up once I get a website for Domain.
Twin Matrix
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Good luck with that. oO