Dung Beetle's Clest-based Sprites (PA)

[Eriol Clowphengire]

Hello, this is my first time showing my sprites here in RMXP.org and I made them using Clest's template.

Hatoru Munakata & his Beiharro Staff (from my Gransazers/Justirisers/Kamen Rider-based RMXP game)
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209 ... taffX2.png[/img]http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209/hatsuyakanzaki0902/HatoruMunakataBeiharroStaff.png[/img]

Hatsuyashi & his Alphreos Lance (still from my Gransazers/Justirisers/Kamen Rider-based RMXP game)
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209 ... X2nobg.png[/img]http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209/hatsuyakanzaki0902/NoBGHatsuyashiAlphreosLance.png[/img]

Hatsuyashi charset
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209 ... uyashi.png[/img]

Hatoru Munakata charset
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209 ... nakata.png[/img]

Hatsuya Kanzaki charset
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209 ... anzaki.png[/img]

 

[Grathea]

Well, here's my opinion, for what it's worth. ($0.02)

The charsets are fairly well done, and the shading isn't bad. Kudos. The hair, however, looks a little strange, and I think could do with an extra shade or two, especially in Hatoru's charset.
Also, you've forgotten to shade under the hair. Otherwise, a solid effort.

 

[Clest]

Nice to see someone using my template and looks promising so far.

I like the designs and the shading, though I would make colors a bit less saturated on both Hatoru and Hatsuya and as the guy above said, work a bit more on the hair. Usually 4 colors for the hair give a nice effect

But really love Hatsuyashi style and his lance :D Post more

 

[Eriol Clowphengire]

http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w209 ... ENTINE.png[/img]

This is still a work in progress but I made this one quick for my Filipino friend and by the way, she's also a character in my tokusatsu sci-fi fantasy anime RPG Walbrunhild Genes1s