[DL] An Empty Present - I am waiting for one. [Story Mode]

[Acezon]

This will be the game mode of the story, "An Empty Present". Click here for the Game Mode.



It's been twelve years. I still haven't got a present. My parents always forget to give me one. But my brother, he always have one every Christmas. It'll be days before the Christmas. I am wishing for a present. I will be waiting for it.

This game is about a boy named Nathan who still hasn't got a present for twelve years. It will be his thirteenth birthday on December 25. His brother, Paul always gets a present from his parents because of his parent's favoritism on Paul. Now, Nathan is waiting for a present from his parents in his coming birthday. There will be a lot of cutscenes in this game.

It's been twelve years since Nathan hasn't got a present from his parents. He is always sad because he has nothing to play with, his brother doesn't want to play with him because he has many toys than Nathan. Even if Nathan doesn't receive presents, he still loves his brother and parents. It will be his birthday on the coming December 25. He is very excited if his parents would give him a present or not. Nathan's waiting for one.

Spoiler: Characters

Nathan Plains

Age: 12
About him: He really loves his brother. He doesn't care even if his brother would hurt him or do something bad to him. He also loves his parents. Nathan is waiting for a present for his coming birthday. Fate will just answer the prayers of Nathan.

Paul Plains

Age: 10
About him: Paul isn't very close with Nathan. He just spends his time by playing all of his toys. He doesn't care about Nathan being lonely, sitting in a corner and doing nothing. But in spite of not being close with Nathan, he still hopes that Nathan will get a present so that he has something to play with.

A glimpse in the title screen..

Ccoa for the Universal Message Script
lambchop for and Simple Screen Splash
Amaranth Games, LLC for Graphics

Unencrypted Version : (Thanks to Dadevster)

If you are going to use the music, no credits needed, just use it.
NOTE : The graphics folder is in the Data Folder, just move it.

If you are going to use the Evented Title Screen, credits goes to me...

Support Bars:

Spoiler: I support An Empty Present

Spoiler: I support Nathan

Enjoy! Don't miss the present.

 

[Acezon]

Updated! You can now download the game!!

 

[Mesh90]

i really enjoyed this game ^^

 

[Versus]

Thery good game and story, good job man!

 

[Despain]

how is "Aveyond 2 Graphics (Ripped)" a FEATURE

 

[Twirly]

how is "Aveyond 2 Graphics (Ripped)" a FEATURE

Not only that

No Battles Included
Custom Message System (specifically Universal Message System)
No Menu System

How is not having something worth to be listed on a feature list? :x
Also why do the other people not consider him as part of the society?
Why do they think he is an orphan? Because he gets no presents?
Well okay then you might think he is an orphan becaus of that, but why don't they consider him as part of the society?

 

[Acezon]

@Twirly
They consider them not a part of the society because he is no that friendly..
His state in his family also affects his behavior... That's why..

@wumpi really loves ;-;
I'll to delete that..

@Mesh90 and Versus
Thanks Guys!!

UPDATE:
Demo is updated because of a script problem..

 

[friend]

Good story, really touching

 

[Acezon]

@killerzkings
Thanks for playing my game! I hope you liked it!

 

[Reives]

I like the concept, nice a simple. Will take a look in the near future, and good luck.

 

[Acezon]

Thanks for that Reives.. I hope you'll download and play my game..^^

 

[Toshi]

This sound very very sad 
I'll test it right now...
Woah, at the beginnig, this is so cruel... But later its so beautifull...
It makes me crying a lil bit...
If u want to release a german version of this too, tell me.
I will send u the translated text in a pm.

This is really really great...
Do u plan more projects like that?

 

[Acezon]

I like shorts. I will obviously make many many more.
There is another short I made, but it is still in planning. Here's the link:
War. Will it end?

 

[Acezon]

A Super Long Time that I didn't update this thread UPDATE:
I'll be making a playable version of this game..
This game itself is just the story, not the real game..

 

[Acezon]

UPDATE:
You can now download the Story Mode!

Clicky!
(It's a RAR File, Gotta need WinRAR!)

Just wait for the Updates regarding the Game Mode!

To the Mods:
Can you please move this topic to the Completed Games thread?
The story mode is already done, I'm just finishing the Game Mode.

 

[Acezon]

UPDATE:
Oh! An unencrypted version! I like it!!

You can download the unencrypted version of this game..

Unencrypted Version : (Thanks to Dadevster)
Clicky!
If you are going to use the music, no credits needed, just use it.
NOTE : The graphics folder is in the Data Folder, just move it.

If you are going to use the Evented Title Screen, credits goes to me...

 

[Acezon]

UPDATE:
• Edited the Main Post.

 

[Marc1k1]

UPDATE:
• Edited the Main Post.

This game sounds ok, I'll download it.. if my damn internet is working tonight... :P

 

[Love]

I played this game a while ago but didn't comment. The game is nice, although I feel the story is real lacking and somewhat cliche. Also, in some parts of the game, the music isn't really fitting with the atmosphere (like the title for example-it made it sound like a dangerous dungeon game). It was pretty short, I think, but never the less, it was somewhat touching. ^^

 

[Ynlraey]

I Agree about the music, I played this a while ago too but I think the story mode was way too fast in regards to pacing and the ending was...eh ok...

10 years of no presents, at least give him special treatment or something even though the ending was specifying why it's just over the top for me or stop lying to the kid wait for next year, wait for next year, wait for next year <_<