OmegaGroudon
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Thanks!Doc Spoc":vqzkkfd5 said:
Well now, screenshot of battling soon. I'm making them out.
Btw, I'll need voice actor badly!!
Those who are interested please PM me. Thanks in advance.
Divinity Council
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Well now, screenshot of battling soon. I'm making them out.
Btw, I'll need voice actor badly!!
Those who are interested please PM me. Thanks in advance.
OmegaGroudon
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Thanks very much! If you support the game, place the banner on your signature.^^Aelous":flucz8wz said:
Any voice actor interest?
GreenGreen
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Btw, Not sure if any ones pointed this out yet, but the Xas abs is made by XRXS
OmegaGroudon
Member
Oh, it must be my mistake.RojoBo":3lvwaj61 said:
Btw, fixed!
OmegaGroudon
Member
Hey guys!!
Divinity Council back!
I've redesigned everything including story and character.
Check the first post!
Divinity Council back!
I've redesigned everything including story and character.
Check the first post!
ebhz.Ash.4rm
Member
Redesigned it, well tell us about it. I don't know anything about this game and the grammar is quite bad, I'd suggest you get someone to help you with it if your English isn't that good.
Also:
And:
If he would've laughed at the thought of believing in God why would he suddenly want to go out of his way to find 6 pieces of a sword that apparently opens the "Gate to Heaven", I find it hard to believe? There's no motivation, okay so he got given one of seven pieces by a spirit but how does he know it's not fake? Why would he even care what it is if he doesn't believe in God. If I was in his place I'd try and sell it and have a good time with the money, hell if everyone's after them they'd sell for millions.
Also practically Zero info on the characters, nice pretty pictures but, there really is nothing there about them, what is Raina to accompany him on his trip? They develop a friendship, so there's nothing before it? If so why would she go with some crazy guy who suddenly believes in God and Heaven because he got one of seven pieces of a "Heaven Weapon"?
This isn't Concept Development but I just see no base for actions, also I see most of the comments in here aren't even about the game just how pretty the externally made systems look. I'm not saying it's bad to have them just that so far no ones been really helpful, it's Project Discussion not gawk at XRSX and Moghunters scripts although the artwork is stunning, I love it, everyone should gawk at that.
Also:
And:
If he would've laughed at the thought of believing in God why would he suddenly want to go out of his way to find 6 pieces of a sword that apparently opens the "Gate to Heaven", I find it hard to believe? There's no motivation, okay so he got given one of seven pieces by a spirit but how does he know it's not fake? Why would he even care what it is if he doesn't believe in God. If I was in his place I'd try and sell it and have a good time with the money, hell if everyone's after them they'd sell for millions.
Also practically Zero info on the characters, nice pretty pictures but, there really is nothing there about them, what is Raina to accompany him on his trip? They develop a friendship, so there's nothing before it? If so why would she go with some crazy guy who suddenly believes in God and Heaven because he got one of seven pieces of a "Heaven Weapon"?
This isn't Concept Development but I just see no base for actions, also I see most of the comments in here aren't even about the game just how pretty the externally made systems look. I'm not saying it's bad to have them just that so far no ones been really helpful, it's Project Discussion not gawk at XRSX and Moghunters scripts although the artwork is stunning, I love it, everyone should gawk at that.
OmegaGroudon
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PixelJunk.Eden":1n2i2i8t said:
Alright, I'll have to explain that.
First, yeah, Hero don't believe in god in the beginning.
There's something happened before I got the first piece of sword.
I don't want to reveal that much so everything will remain secret untill you play the game.
For the character, the same thing, I dont want to reveal much about them.
I want player to know about them by playing the game.
Hope you understand.
It's really lame to say "I'm going to hold off on key details which affect a reader's impression of the game because it might spoil the first half hour." Don't be afraid to spoil whatever amazing revelations you had planned in the introduction; between that and leaving threadgoers with a lame-duck understanding of the plot, it's much worse to have a project thread that doesn't reveal much of note. Since you're afraid of spoiling something that happens even before the quest begins, I doubt it'd be much of a loss. For everything else, well...
Don't tell me that you can't do any better than this!?
There's keeping key secrets secret and then there's making your entire game a big inaccessible monolith. You're being way too tight-lipped here -- so it turns out that the main villain killed the hero's father, that's the sort of thing you don't have to reveal in a character description, but please tell us more about his personality and his motives!
Don't tell me that you can't do any better than this!?
There's keeping key secrets secret and then there's making your entire game a big inaccessible monolith. You're being way too tight-lipped here -- so it turns out that the main villain killed the hero's father, that's the sort of thing you don't have to reveal in a character description, but please tell us more about his personality and his motives!
OmegaGroudon
Member
Okay. I agreed with you.
Fix the character soon.
Fix the character soon.
ebhz.Ash.4rm
Member
OmegaGroudon":vp3361ul said:
You really should, the art is the only reason I think this project could be going somewhere, it's the only original thing in here besides the flat plot detailed above.
OmegaGroudon
Member
Hi guys! Here for a good news.
A custom message system I did.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r266 ... essage.png[/img]
Tell me what do you all think.
Btw, it was in a testmap. With a test dialogue.
A custom message system I did.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r266 ... essage.png[/img]
Tell me what do you all think.
Btw, it was in a testmap. With a test dialogue.
Desecration
Member
The system looks nice, a lot like another custom AMS floating around though. Dubealex's I think. Either way, nice work on it looks decent.
OmegaGroudon
Member
Oh thanks. Actually it was ccoa's UMS.
I just simply used it function and add something into it.
Anymore comment?
I just simply used it function and add something into it.
Anymore comment?
OmegaGroudon
Member
Oh thanks really.
But there is a lot of work on the battle system. ( May be changed )
But there is a lot of work on the battle system. ( May be changed )