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WE WILL NOT TOLERATE SUCH IDEALS
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PLEASE COOPERATE
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What the fuck is a hip hopper?
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I'm kind of confused at the concept of this game. I mean, you say it's set in the modern age at a time when the walls of the world come crashing down for a reason known only to you as a designer and for some reason I just don't know where I'm supposed to stand on this.
In the good games you really have to choose a path and be committed to that path. This was something I had to come to terms with when story writing along time ago, choosing two paths which are at opposite sides of the game spectrum (For example the Set in Modern Age and yet magic exists) requires a very good story teller behind it. I'm not saying that these two couldn't work but I'll be very interested to see just how you tell this story.
On a Constructive Criticism note, I watched the intro and I was still scratching my head as to what on earth this guy was on about. I mean yes it's good to add mystery and not to tell the audience everything in the first chapter but it just read as if you'd chosen random words and made them fit together.
I love the art, and in a way the characters are good. Hopefully during the game you'll add more depth to them.
I look forward to seeing how you create this game, I feel you had the right ingredients but were looking at the wrong cook book.
In the good games you really have to choose a path and be committed to that path. This was something I had to come to terms with when story writing along time ago, choosing two paths which are at opposite sides of the game spectrum (For example the Set in Modern Age and yet magic exists) requires a very good story teller behind it. I'm not saying that these two couldn't work but I'll be very interested to see just how you tell this story.
On a Constructive Criticism note, I watched the intro and I was still scratching my head as to what on earth this guy was on about. I mean yes it's good to add mystery and not to tell the audience everything in the first chapter but it just read as if you'd chosen random words and made them fit together.
I love the art, and in a way the characters are good. Hopefully during the game you'll add more depth to them.
I look forward to seeing how you create this game, I feel you had the right ingredients but were looking at the wrong cook book.
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what pisses me off about the thing isn't that the music is bad. I like it. It's not that it's missing emotion. It has that. It's not that it's unappealing to the eye. It's very appealing.
It's more of that fact that I've got not a single effin clue WTF it was or what it had to do with this project and the fact that most of the stuff was taking from (very well known) sources.
It's more of that fact that I've got not a single effin clue WTF it was or what it had to do with this project and the fact that most of the stuff was taking from (very well known) sources.
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That is so completely, amazingly, dubiously amusing that I just had to reiterate the point. You are either a troll, or as naïve as that guy who made The Demon Rush.
The story of King David. Except he's a skater. Who uses a sword. Who teams up with a thirteen-year-old "native". Also, something about a terrible Luc Besson film. Read those partial sentences, then stand in the corner and think about what you've done.
The story of King David. Except he's a skater. Who uses a sword. Who teams up with a thirteen-year-old "native". Also, something about a terrible Luc Besson film. Read those partial sentences, then stand in the corner and think about what you've done.
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ALL YOUR GAME ARE BELONG TO US
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