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Destiny's Howl

Zeos

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Aiolos has lived with wolves ever since he was little. His parent's died one night, and he was carried into a forest by a wolf. Ever since then he has lived with them. One day Aiolos is out hunting in the forest for his family. (a pack of wolves) He spots a animal in the grass, slowly he reaches for his sword. He watches as the grass moves with the animal, then he lifts his sword and stabs the grass. A small cry is heard and the animal is dead, Aiolos says a prayer for the animal, then hoists it on his back to take home. He arrives at the Wolf's camp and shows the animal to his family. They begin to eat the animal, then they all go to sleep...
Late one night, he has a nightmare. A nightmare, and a dream at the same time. The dream shows him horrible monsters known as Juraki. The Juraki are creatures that form from people when they pass away, they suck the souls of the living then use them to gain power. Eventually they will gain enough power to resurrect their king, Dowdoldo. Aiolos can't stop thinking about his dream for the next few days. Finally he tells his family goodbye, and sets out trying to find a way to stop the Juraki.
Aiolos (Means "quick-moving, nimble" in Greek...)
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Age: 15
Weapon: Swords
Class: Wolfboy
Bio: Leo never really knew his parent's. They died on one stormy night, nobody knows how. Then a wolf came to rescue Leo. It carried him off into the forest, and he has lived there ever since. Over the years he has developed Wolf's ears and become very swift.


Keigo
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Age:19
Weapon:Knifes
Class:Bounty Hunter
Bio: Not much is known about Keigo. He broke out of prison and somebody made a bounty on Aiolos's head. So, Kiego sets out to find Aiolos and return him dead or alive...


Alexis
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Age:14
Weapon:Orbs
Class:Mage
Bio: Alexis is a top graduate from Zeke's Mage School. She uses orbs that have elemental powers, and maybe even the ability to call upon beasts.


Vanessa
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Age:23
Weapons:Rods
Class:Priest
Bio: Vanessa is a priest that has no real beliefs in the religion she studies. She is very doubtful and not very reliable unless she is focused. However Aiolos has a positive sense about her, and believes she can become a very good priest.
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Lufia Style Battle Reports
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you should change razorik's bio: if his parents were dead when he was born, how exactly was he born?(i'm assuming you mean died when he was born, meaning shortly afterwards. Unless it's meant to be part of his great destiny, like a virgin birth, or a birthmark etc, in which casse i apologise)
 

Zeos

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Granas3 REMIXED;110994 said:
you should change razorik's bio: if his parents were dead when he was born, how exactly was he born?(i'm assuming you mean died when he was born, meaning shortly afterwards. Unless it's meant to be part of his great destiny, like a virgin birth, or a birthmark etc, in which casse i apologise)
Sorry bout that. Thank you for pointing it out, lol!
 
What are you bumping for, there isn't basically anthing to comment on yet. What you do I have I will though. The story (what's of it) is completely cliche and dull. Having a game start with running an errand is pretty boring. Having a legendary stone/crystal/necklace/sword etc is also very dull and cliche.

I also would find the heros main name of Razoric very annoying over the course of a game, Keigo is fine, Razoric not so fine. If you want more feedback post more information - some screenshots and something that makes us want to play your game over someone elses.
 
Google a Game name maker.

Mine came from a cross between final fantasy and because it has a group called "phantom" I guess i used that too.

Formula: Existing game name + In-game thing = Game name.

(EG: Final Fantasy + Phantom = Fantasy Phantom)
 
If you are making a standard fantasy game Zeos, then I often look at this dog naming website for interesting names. There are also links at the bottom to other sorts of names.

http://www.lowchensaustralia.com/names/mysticalnames.htm

As for getting a writer, I feel it kind of defies the point of making an RPG - I mean if someone else writes the story and characters, surely they would have to do all the dialogue too, which is a very big ask. Your story doesnt have to be heavily detailed, just think of something else your hero can do for the course of the game.

Or perhaps answer some of these plotholes so it makes more sense... why is his uncle giving the king a sword... who is his uncle, why does he have it, whats his relation to the king. what would the king do with it, whos the thief, what did the thief want with the sword, if the sword is so special why did the uncle give it a 15 year old boy to transport, what can the sword do, what does it require to do this power, what are peoples motivations for trying to use it.

There's just a few questions to answer to help you pad out the story.
 
Yes... Things like sprites, custom art, music, sound effects etc don't slow down the eventing process, just use arshes as the main hero for now and substitute a new one in, or perhaps more sensibly, import a character called "hero" for example, and then when you have a finished sprite, also call it filename: hero and when you import the new one it will overwrite all traces of your old hero sprite. Helpful when you change sprites in events.
 

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