Demon Flame

[powerdude]

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            Stuff this, I think i'll wait until I finish my next game.

 

[Luminier]

Please read the Project Discussion rules. You'll need to include much more information here. Tell us about your characters, try elaborating a bit more on your story(events of the game, etc.), and tell us how this thing plays; Is it a traditional RTP RPG with no bells and or whistles? Give us some info, man! You have... Oh, say, twenty-four hours to fix up your post with all of the appropriate information before I lock this.

 

[Luminier]

Why does your banner image have so much dead space, man? It makes your post ridiculously long. Crop that shit, please and thanks.

Those two screenshots-- the ones with the "monsterous boss" and the one with "the world covered in demons"-- look really, really atrocious. I can't even make out what the hell is going on! I see generic a RTP demon in one, and RTP battle animations and that weird red thing(is it a fog?); RTP fire character sets and-- I just don't know what's going on @_@

 

[powerdude]

Are you a mod

 

[Luminier]

Um, duh? I guess you couldn't have known that, though. It's not like common sense would tell you that the guy who says that he will LOCK YOUR THREAD is a mod. If I were you, I definitely wouldn't bother to check my profile page to see what my membergroup was. Sorry for the confusion on my part! :thumb:

 

[powerdude]

That's ok, apology accepted :tongue:

:rock:

 

[Luminier]

... *facepalm*

And you're gonna need some more info here, guy. Expand a bit more on the battle system. It sounds like some sort of ABS, am I correct? Is it scripted or event made, or what? Is it unique to your project or did someone else make it? I'm sure you have more than two characters in your game. And these two that you have listed surely have more to them than just a single sentence's worth of adjective, yes? Please tell us more.

I'd love it if you responded to my comments about your screenshots.

And what is the point of the spoilers for just two or three sentences??

 

[powerdude]

With the screenshots, they aren't too hard to see when you're actually playing the game
and i'll elaborate on that other stuff.

 

[Luminier]

ahahahahaha you must be a troll or something hahahaha

I'd hardly call three dialogue boxes on a map against an evil black phallus panorama a demo!

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Seriously, please explain to me what this thing is @_@

With the screenshots, they aren't too hard to see when you're actually playing the game

and I sincerely doubt this.

 

[powerdude]

It says to download the save file if you haven't already got one!!
: rock :rock::

and it's a tower

 

[WildCard]

This is the worst, giant evil robot penis in the back

 

[Nickster]

This is the worst, giant evil robot penis in the back

It's a demon dick, obviously, even I can see that.

 

[Luthur]

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Visit beautiful areas.

You could have fooled me. That is far from beautiful. Seriously, you're mapping is awful. Then I laugh to myself when I read the name of the image: 'better_mapping4.jpg'. Better?! What was your first atempt?

Ok, your storyline:

The actual idea is quite good. It seems OK, if basic. But:

He came down from the north, a black veil of death coming behind him, leaving none alive.

Uh, why?

The high priests of every god were called upon and together they created a blade that would cut through even demon flesh.

What demon? Where'd that come from?

they used that legendary blade to cut a hole in Hell itself.

Again, why? I thought they were trying to kill the demon, not hell.

and they locked that gate With 5 keys. For the location of the other gate they knew not.

What gate? Why did they lock it? And which 'other' gate? What's that?

Right, now I've said that, I'll offer some serious advice. Read some mapping tutorials. Have a look at some other people's games, and how they are presented. Read up on some storyline tutorials. And then you might have a game, rather than this.

 

[Dewoor]

Nickster, Wildcard, you made my day xD