[DEMO]World Of Axyz : Maza's Revenge

[Kaito]

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A Dreams Studio's Production

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Before the time had begun, there's only four living creatures in this world...They are the Titans. The Titans have the power to create, which they used to create a world, the World of Axyz. In the world, the Titans have also created living creatures, to look after Axyz, which includes Elves, Aeonas, Humans, and Chaos.

The Chaos, led by their leader, Maza are very unlike the other creatures on Axyz.. The Chaos loves violence and destructions. They kill the weaker creatures, without any mercy. The Titans did not expect this to happen; they thought that their creations were perfect, but the Chaos were far from it. The Titans went to reconcile with Maza. Maza fought them off, and declared war with the Titans.

The Titans have no choice but to annihilate every Chaos that fought them. 7 years passed, and Maza, and the Chaos that didn't fought are the only remaining of their race left. The Titans cornered Maza, and tried to kill it. Maza, which the Titans gave a power that they long forgotten to lead the Chaos used the forbidden power, and sealed the Titans, into four Crystals, and placed them in Axyz, and placed a guardian to guard each of the Crystals, while he recovers from the damage the Titans have caused him.

The other Axyz creatures and race knew about this, and went to kill Maza.
Maza tried to fought them, but failed, because the number that fought him is far greater than his own powers. Maza then fled, and to protect himself, he sealed himself into a Dragon Statue, while waiting for his power to recover. When he reigns, he will finish his job, and again, conquers Axyz



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World Of Axyz : Maza's Revenge will be splitted into more than 10 chapters, each which an at least 30 minutes of gameplay. Every chapter is connected, with a lot of side-quests and battles.

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Status : Completed.
Download Now~!2.9 MB...15mins

Spoiler: story

-The King of Argaria is worried about the news that there are people missing in his city. He left his pregnant wife, while journeyed to Mount Furud, where they say, the source of the problem…The King’s return from the journey brought back more than good news…

Spoiler: Screenshots

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Spoiler: Credits

Graphics :

1. Enterbrain
2. Mack
3. Quartz
4. Tana
5. |3_2
6. Ccoa
7. AndyJP
8. Poizyn
9. Shifter

Music:

1. Mark
2. Lene
3. Yapperface
4. TruthfulTiger
5. BigBilly

Programming:

1. KGC
2. Near_Fantastica
3. Missy

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Status : Eventing

Spoiler: Story

-After 17 years of the Argarian Castle Massacre, young Ax found himself planning a robbery in the Castle of Argaria with the famous gang of thieves, The Marauders. Little that he knows, He’ll find more than treasures in the kingless castle, full of soldiers, and even…Ghosts.

Spoiler: Screenshots

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Features:

1. Animated RTAB CBS, with custom battle sprites(Cogwheel and Minkoff, heacily edited by me)
2. Custom Face Message System(Ccoa, heavily edited by me. Face from Namamura Sensei)
3. Custom Menu System(Scripted by me)
4. Custom Quest System(By Leon, minor edits by me)
5. A new ability system (By Squall, heavily edited by me)

Please leave a comment, as I really need em to improve. ^-^

 

[jimmyly]

Can you replace the screen shots going up and down not side-ways

I await for Ep1:|

 

[Kuja]

umm question i cant seem to DL. It brings me to a URL 400% (or something like that) cant be fould.

 

[Kaito]

OH MY GOD~!!
and nobody has ever posted that my link is broken!!? #

...Well...Neways, uploaded a new demo. -_-
Thank you very much Kuja, really appreciate it. :nya:


Hope people will play it now~
cya!

I feel so betrayed... ;p

 

[Kyoru]

...Did he just call Kaito, "Moogle"?

Watched the first chapter...or...uhh...the zero-th chapter (?) X_X?? The sprites are good. Although, can't shake the feeling that something's not rite about the whole thing. Meh, I'll check it out again later.

 

[Ancient]

That was a very nice prologue! To me, it was aesthetically beautiful. The GFX and sprites were well done so that should explain it.

Anyways, can't wait for Chapter 1! Love to see some new screens! ^^

 

[The Man]

This does look okay, and interesting so I will download and try it. But please tell me that the game is easier to understand then your history on the top post. I am not one for spelling and stuff. -I get hammered about it all the time in my own project- but your history was very very hard to understand.
Anyhow. I'll let you know my thoughts after I play.

Okay. The good.
The game is actually quite good. Including your mapping. It seems to flow properly so far. I must point out a mistake though, when the king is talking to his wife he says 'We could be king and king together'. Very nice work for the majority so far.

Good job though. This really suprised me.

 

[Kaito]

@Civil_Protection :
I <3 you TREG...Always do. You know that don't you ^-^

@Kyoru:
Something not right? Haha...Thanks anyway.^^

@Ancient:
Thankies...^^

@TheMan:
Thank you for informing me that.

@Everyone~
Updated first post with credits I've forgotten in the folder...Added a Screenie for Chapter 1...And...A battle system mockup.^^

Things to do in Chapter 1:
-Finish that one scene
-Make graphics for CMS
-Finish the sprites the CBS X.X
-Debug the Steal system X.X
The last two would be the longest to do...^^
When I'll finish? I also dunno...Hopefully before christmas.^^

cya~

 

[pixel?trump]

This sounds reasonable enough to download. The mapping looks good to.
I'll give it a go.
Edit. I see Billy's name in the credits. I thought he retired. Is he helping you with this project at all?

 

[Jstreet]

I'm not sure what to think about this. There are a few things that I'm confused about:
-Is this a game or show?
If it's a show, then you need to use the auto message dispose, because I got sick of constantly pressing the button. Plus, why do you select the name of your character?

Anyway.
On the Errors:
Not that I was looking for any, but some just happen to stick out at me.
-The word "be" is cut off in the beginning.
-"We can rule Axyz as King and King..." O.o
-"Burn them to their crips." Crips are a gang, I think the word you wanted was crypts.

On the Story:
Actually, it has a pretty nice plot. As I watched it I imagined some better things you could've done with it, but overall I was satisfied. I have to say that you did a pretty good job putting things in order and developing your characters. I like where the plot is going and I am interested in digging more into this, but if your going to make this a show, then please refer to my previous statements.

On the music:
I like the use of the music. I had to comment on the positioning. Not much to say here except for good job on the usage.

Closing:
Whether this turns into a game, or stays a show, I will be interested. I had always had my doubts about this, but after checking it out I actually kind of like it. You did a good job overall.

~Kolo The Panda

 

[Diedrupo]

it's just a preview/opening cut-scene, i am assuming chapter 1 has actual game content.

 

[Sellous]

I loved the music. Everything is great, except for that annoying sound in the talks, while scribing something.

 

[Starwinderbeta]

I like the storyline so far. It's good, but it could be better with improved dialogue, imo.

The use of music was superb, and I loved the way you used the sprites in terms of animation.

Solid.

 

[Spiritual]

Pretty good. I can't wait for Chapter 1.

(There was a moment in the game where I thought Sir Narz [or whatever his name was] was evil )

There were a few grammar mistakes here and there (don't quite remember where they were, sorry) plus when the queen was dying, she calls out, "Axcel..." whether you decided to name the baby Axcel or not.

 

[XP Learner]

So far this story is really interesting. i can't wait for chapter 1.

 

[~Atlaswing~]

(whoa, new emoticons! XD )
O_o :yes: :#

-"Burn them to their crips." Crips are a gang, I think the word you wanted was crypts.

Jstreet is right about some spelling errors... Uhm, i think Kaito meant CRISPS?... BURN THEM TO CRISPS?...

Anyway, i find the message sound annoying, try to use a softer SE... And i suggest turning off the SE on message when NARRATIONS are written..


Resha the pregnant is a bit weird... Her belly looks weird...

I love the part where Rumulus tried to kill Resha then everyone else tried to attack Rumulus.. You designed that scene REMARKABLY.. Very dramatic... XD

Good Luck with this!!!

 

[joel_yeah]

The DL is down again... At least it is for me.

 

[Kaito]

Hiya all,
Well...Thank you Joel for informing me that...I uploaded a new demo, with a few text fixes, and music updates. Thank you J-Street and Atlastwing for pointing out few of em. (Yes they are many)^^

Neways...UPLOADED A NEW DEMO~!!!

Chapter 1 is still in the progress...A lil bit slow I'm afraid...Debugging the steal system is a hell of a job. =___=
Sprites are 80% tho...And I got a databaser, so it will go a bit more smoothly.^^

cya!!