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Dear god.. Brosek's Songs/Poetry.. its so beautiful *sniff*

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--- Song---
Night sky

If I fall right now will... y o u c a t c h m e~
This rain falls slowly carressing.. swaying.. like your touch.
in this starlit sky, I see in your eyes.. blanketed by innocence
I awaken.. gazing out of the window seeing it as just a dream.
It still rains within my heart.. that sky is still within me.
and I gaze towards that sky so dark.. it must symbolize you were pretending~
there is nothing but memories in these stars.. T H E Y F E E L S O E M P T Y~
if I could walk away from the start... I w o u l d n ' t b e l i m p i n g.


when I dream it is your poison that intoxicates me.
... [these fumes are fragant, but kills me slowly]
when I think it is your venom that rots my heart.
... [its bittersweet to me, yet it erodes me]
These memories are many, they play over and over again in the night sky
when I gaze at these moving pictures.. you wonder what I am looking at.
This sky of you has become so beautiful for me~
if only you could see why every star, reminds me of you.
This aurora sky...

Was it a dream.. was it a dream..
When I breathe.. I feel our hearts as one..
I can feel your breath.. feel you breathe
I close my eyes.. as you take my breath away.
Life is but a metaphor in this night sky.


If I cry right now.. w i l l y o u c o m f o r t m e~
The wind blows so ominously embracing.. pacing.. like your love.
In this starlit sky, I see in your eyes.. unsure blinded by grief.
I awaken.. gazing out of the window seeing it as just a dream.
It's still drafty in my heart.. that coldness is still within me.
and as I gaze towards a sky so dark.. it must symbolize my love is descending~
there is nothing but pain in these stars.. T H E Y F E E L S O E M P T Y~
If I could stop embarrassing myself from the start.. you wouldnt be against me.

[or will you?]

when I DREAM! its your breath that suffocates me.
..[this air is nostalgic, but I cant breathe]
when I GAZE! its your touch that impales me~
..[this feeling is gentle, but will be the death of me]
These memories are many, they play over and over again in the night sky
when I gaze at these moving pictures.. you wonder what I am looking at.
This sky of you has become so beautiful for me~
if only you could see why every star, reminds me of you.
This aurora sky...

Was it a dream.. was it a dream..
When I breathe.. I feel our hearts as one..
I can feel your breath.. feel you breathe
I close my eyes.. as you take my breath away.
Life is but a metaphor in this night sky.

--Poem--



Walking into the wavering sunlight, we as fallen angels.
with no clue where we are going, lost in the modern day lights... where we cant see the stars.

He smiles, for he falls short from grace..
his eyes, entwined in the tear of the bard clown
He loves, noone a slave to his prose.
he sighs, searching for himself in the blue sky

".. who am I, again? I exist, but am I really alive?
Drifting, and falling a rogue rain drop in a summer's rain
this dark sky shows no sign of giving way..
is life really this short or am I speeding towards the ground?"

He smiles,  for he almost grasps the heaven
his eyes, entwined in the heart of the stars themselves
He loves, noone a slave to his innocence
he sighs, searching for himself.. the sky isnt blue anymore

Walking into the shadows of the wading moon, we are as fallen dreams
with no clue where we are going, lost in panic of modern day luxuries.. where we can not see ourselves.

Paint a picture of eternity in the dimensions of her heart.
the loneliness is the canvas and the sorrow keeps you numb.
Can you hear me, you lone wolf.. ?
I can see it all in your eyes!

[OH MY SOUL BURNS WITH THE IRONY OF IT ALL! ]

"..Just as your breath touches my lips, I fade away from you!
Was it fate that cursed me? [To have sight but never see]
When can I finally breathe.. without saying your name?
Are you forever mine? .. my love because I am forever yours"


He laughs.. with his last breath he cries her name.
He cries.. for she will never know his true name
He loves, noone a victim of his own fate
he bleed, this crimson is such a enamoring shade of blue..

Walking into the light of the illuminating stars, we are as unrequited lovers
with no clue where we are going, lost in the confusion of our own hearts.. where we can not feel others pain.

Paint a picture of eternity in the dimensions of your heart.
the pandora is the brush and the misery keeps you numb.
Can you hear me, you lone wolf.. ?
I can see it all in your glare.

[.. oh my soul burns...... with the irony of it all.]

She loves a poet, he doesnt know how to love for he was never shown..
If he dies, what do they care..? Sages are only realized when they die.
His wings are wet and he can not fly, back to the stars where his origins lie.
.. is that why he is constantly searching in the night sky, reaching for the stars?
 
Tears


Looking into the mirror as if my own heart
this person I see so close but worlds apart
Do you? (Do you?)
Hear me? (Hear me?)
I see you but you're not here..
visible, but still not clear
Grey reflections on raindrops, crash with broken dreams
each moment dissolves as swiftly as they came
shadows with no voices..
minds beyond choices
a solitary heart that beats only for you
inner child sleeps through heartache's curfew
Do you? (Do you?)
Hear me? (Hear me?)
Whatever happened to compassion
actions that cant be rationed
dreams that turn unpleasant
shame for our dear reverend
the promise land overcome with contraband
violence and things I cant understand
an eye for an eye, we took until we couldnt see
murders in the name of a lord who gave so earnestly
Father, my father.. do you not sense our loathing.
as the final page of the story of our life begins unfolding.
Our leaders have become matyrs
the sky is becoming darker.
Answers have become questions.. questions become answers
parasites are now humans humans are now cancer
Christian, jew, buddhist, muslim..
bloodshed for a lord that loves them..
death, on the eve of destruction
blindsighted because we didnt see it coming.



I am a fallen soldier.. I am a desperate father
I am a saddened lover.. I am a son departed
I am just a voice.. I can not be heard
I am a lost memory.. I am a dream deterred.
I am walking down a cemetary.. I am looking at a grave.
I am crying endless.. I am sure he could've been saved.
I am looking away.. there is nothing I can see
I am turning the page.. this book is of uncertainty.
[I am the human race.. I am clouded with doubt.
I am turning away.. I am trying to figure out.]
You are a widowed wife.. you are a rebellious son
you are stubborn lover.. you are too far gone
You are just a face... you can not hear
You are so forgetful.. you are sure I am not here
you are lost in translation.. you are too far away
you are hurting so much.. you are trying to be brave
You are reaching from the abyss.. you are trying to reach
you are unsure of your place.. you are desperate for me

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Plastic Roses


Searching for a shadow
with my eyes wide shut
at home with my self
whom I love so much
a princess in rags
a slipper made of glass..
these are fairytales that I like
as I'm crying asleep each night
Here we are reaching for things we wish true
autumn leaf, autumn breeze, in this sky so blue
for every picture we take, lies a part we leave frozen
we have lost our own scent in these plastic roses


Love! Please give me my desires!
I want! To reach the clouds, to soar higher!
I need! A place where I can avoid truth..
I embrace.. this gold made for fools.


Searching for a reason
my eyes the fixated forward
desperately trying to watch my back
crying wolf to my own lord
An apathetic bard with no song
but a heart made of gold
these are the stories that I want
as Im holding you so close
Here we are reaching towards the sky
winter snow, winter cold, as we helplessly lie
for every smile we fake, is an heart that is broken
we have lost our own scent in these plastic roses

Love! Please give me my desires!
I want! To reach the clouds, to soar higher!
I need! A place where I can avoid truth..
I embrace.. this gold made for fools.
 
Despain":19hl6r7p said:
It seems like you're trying more to write song lyrics than poetry.

Im used to writing songs.. so the format is pretty much the same for my poetry and songs. I am really used to writing just for me.

Deepest apologies =o.
 
oh dear god bro you infinitely cheesy motherfudged.

tbh youre not a bad writer tho. keep in mind i have no idea what i'm talking about too. =D
 
You're a good poet, but you are let down by such fudgey topics. The result is a bit "self-loathing, woe is me, HAI GUYS 16 HERE".

You have a good eye for structure and style, though, so it'd be nice to see what you could do with other topics.
 
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