Dawn of War: The First Age Trailer Released!

[Kraft]

I have been working on this game for some time, and a few days ago I thought that I should come up with a Trailer.
This is a Trailer, not a Demo, so as soon as you start it, it will run by iteself.
Feedback is Greatly Apprecieated!
(also, I used 2 anamations from a differeent game (copy/paste) and I cant remember what game it was from. they have been floating around in my RMXP project where I place everything I want to save in, and I found them and they were cool.)
I also used Dubleaxes Messaging script.
here is the link, the filesize is 4 megabytes (large filesize credited to the 6 pictures that I used)
Please Download it and tell me what you think!

Spoiler: Download Link

http://www.box.net/public/voyman4y4m

(also, one more thing, about my title... this game title sounds like a commonly used one, so if you have ecreated a game with that title, please tell me as soon as possible so I can possibly change it (unless your game is less than 3 weeks old, in which I got it first)

thanks!

Kraft

 

[Zoom]

I don't think the game's title is used by anyone else... however, I'm not the one who makes the cheese.

OK... bug report / mini-review:

•One thing I like is the artsy-fartsy text has transparent shadowing.
•...have never before known war.
•Lots Of Text Like This Can Sometimes Be Annoying.
•So the ground goes right up to the clouds? That's some accessible "God".
•People speaking in quotes; it should be fairly evident who is speaking even without them.
•"Weak" shouldn't be capitalized there.
•Those are nice spell effects, I'll give you that. Actually someone else gave you that.

For a teaser trailer, it's still very short, but you manage to make it look effortlessly thorough and detailed. Could be worse, so you must be on the right track. Good luck!

 

[Jstreet]

@Zoom
You spelled accessible wrong. XD

 

[Kraft]

Thanks for those bugs zoom, ahh, I can see the spelling mistake now...
I will fix it...
about the caps, well... I have a heavy left hand finger... and I use the caps key too much, that I know...

the artsy-fartsy text is from lord of the rings (with a adobe filter)

thanks for the compliments, it took me about 3 hours to make that trailer from scratch (because it needed to be in its own file, and I have copied the maps into my current game now)

Kraft

(PS, I dont make the cheese :D )

 

[Lightning Mcqueen]

pretty good, is this a rough attempt?

 

[Kraft]

pretty good, is this a rough attempt?

if you mean I am still improving it than yes.
also, it was my first attempt at a Trailer, and I thought it was pretty good...
except for the spelling, that was the only mistake that I noticed (thanks to zoom) :D

kraft

 

[JD_Slasha]

O_o.....

Welp. Interesting to say the least.

 

[Zoom]

@Zoom
You spelled accessible wrong. XD

Perhaps I did.