Dark Light - Revealing The Past

[Twilight]

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Story

Every three thousand years, A person is selected to be the host or trigger.
Depending on what type of person this “hostâ€ÂÂ

 

[Lene]

I'm not too fond of the angel/demon subplot but I did like the premise of one person deciding whether the world would continue to exist as it is or be reborn. I'll just have to play the game to make a final decision.

 

[BlackStaticWolf]

I have one small issue... if a new trigger is chosen every 100 years, how can his/her decision really be for anything more than the next 100 years?

I mean... if one trigger decides the world gets to continue for the next two thousand years, and the new trigger comes along 100 years later and decides that the world should end... whose decision takes precedence?

 

[Twilight]

It was kinda late last night and I was half sleep, since then I have put a little more effort into character development, and ima try to rewrite the story to make it seem a little more realistic

 

[RavenTDA]

Ya know this has quite an appeal. Keep going. I like what you have so far. Like Myonosken said it's not too complicated nor is it too dull. It'll be nicer to see you have some screens up and some of the graphics you are going to be using. :D

 

[Mercutio]

Dunno, half of this sounds a little bit like that show "X" or "X/1999" whichever it is.

 

[Twilight]

Dunno what X is but any similarities to anything (other than characters since some are based on a anime or two) are coincidental

 

[Twilight]

Updated with rewritten character profiles and a test version of the Title. As far as the story is concerned, I have to actually write it out before implementing it into the game through my head so that it would make more sense. Comments are welcome as well

 

[Legion]

I have an issue with how inordinately young all of your PCs are. You are not the Japanese and hence should have no problem understanding that everyone above the age of 25 is not necessarily an 'old geezer'. Three of your main PCs are 18 and another two are 19-20 which while it could be interesting in a setting where it makes sense (like an academy that's grouping them by age, for instance) but as it is now seems like too big of a coincidence. Finally, assuming your game is the traditional type, with battles, I must question the effectiveness of any 11 YEAR OLD, no matter how magical, in a fight.

Your premise (or at least what it hints at) actually seems kind of interesting, which is a rarity. Keep up the good work.

-L

P.S. Dark Light is a terrible name and you'll also be sharing it with a terrible RM game of the same name, so I'd suggest changing it. : )

 

[Twilight]

Characters are loosely based upon people that I know so thats why the ages are so young (For these particular six anyway). As far as the title, It has a significant tie in with the game so can't change it xD. besides I have seen plenty of games with the same title (Chrono Crisis for one >.>)

 

[Darth.T]

It's not bad.

But DarkLight was my name!!

 

[Twilight]

Due to a tragic event in my life I am dropping my old story and creating a new one. This game will be made in dedication to a friend of mine that recently passed away