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This is made using Green Raven's cucumber template.


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Oh oops didn't realise you were bumpin there. Hmm you could use more shading or more contrast. How many colors are you using? Right now it's looking rather flat.
 
The arms are OK, but the legs are practically not there, and don't look like they're stepping at all... it doesn't help that the feet never leave contact with the ground, so it looks like they're sliding around rather than stepping.
 
Unka Josh":20p41s1p said:
The arms are OK, but the legs are practically not there, and don't look like they're stepping at all... it doesn't help that the feet never leave contact with the ground, so it looks like they're sliding around rather than stepping.
He didn't make the template you know.
 

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