Critique would be lovely

[xinrua]

lol. I am doing the back view right now, but it is so hard can't get the hair right.

I'm pretty far behind then, I kinda get the concept of how he hair works, but I cant help until I'm there, and that probably won't be til tomorrow, sorry

It's ok. I am just gonna try it til I get it.

 

[geox-2.0]

lol. I am doing the back view right now, but it is so hard can't get the hair right.

I'm pretty far behind then, I kinda get the concept of how he hair works, but I cant help until I'm there, and that probably won't be til tomorrow, sorry

It's ok. I am just gonna try it til I get it.

Great determination, lol, go for it

Edit: I tried to shape the hair in side view, dunno if its good or not, I'll do the shading tomorrow.
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk23 ... show-3.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[xinrua]

Edit: I tried to shape the hair in side view, dunno if its good or not, I'll do the shading tomorrow.
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk23 ... show-3.png[/IMGzoom]

That is actualy prety good, but I think the hair at the bottom of the neck is a bit much try shrinking it in twords the neck, unless you want him to have an afro.
WAY TO GO!

EDIT: looks like i'll make my finnished sprite tomorrow sometime aswell.

 

[geox-2.0]

OK so I got the hair to look..... kinda OK in my eyes, and I did this kinda blindly, which makes me kinda happy because it looks nice, but seems like its missing something...

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk23 ... show-5.png[/imgzoom]

EDIT: I felt something was off, so I remembered to put the fur on and I had to increase the size of the headband, I think increasing the size made more sense of my hair shading and I think it looks better

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk23 ... show-6.png[/imgzoom]

Please tell me if you have any suggestions or feel the hair is off, please let em know the problem and I will fix it

 

[The Data Mage]

Looks good, would like to see the other side, remember on the right facing one to include the fringe

 

[xinrua]

Well mine ended up looking okay, so I am gonna try making a new one, later, or maybe a tileset, IDK.
Yours is ending up to look so cute! I love it!

 

[geox-2.0]

Thanks and I would never forget the bangs, their his life..... hm, not really but their hard to do on the right side, the left view is okay.

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk23 ... show-7.png[/IMGzoom]
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I cant seem to get the view that I put as not okay right, unless it looks right....

Xinrua: Make a new one, I'm going for a new char after this one also. Maybe I should make a new productive breeze thing like my robots. (My robots were early breeze robot template, looked nice and people loved it) Or maybe just a regular character.

EDIT: Another problem I'm having is the yellow hair in the back view..... I cant seem to get it right, the red is okay, and in case you didn't know the red hair is lapping over the back of the headband and that's why its like that

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk23 ... show-8.png[/imgzoom]